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for The Name in Red **COMPLETE**

by Raug397

schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bravo! wonderful love scene you did a fantastic job not only that but you also added even more mystery to the story...hmm who could the mysterious robed figures be...hmmm. *dance the update dance of happiness* Kudos to one of the best fanfic writers on the net. ^_^
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely sex scene - Severus being rather sweet for all his sinister black-robed airs.

But how are they going to get into Gringotts? And who are the mystery ill-doers?
person jackie
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! it made me happy in the pants. i stayed home today in the hopes that you had updated. ^_^ woot!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darlin', its not hard to relate this to the books; you've written it in almost the exact same style! Bravo on that, but more bravo on making Snape human AND sexy. Keep writing, we're holding our breaths!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Of course Harry's going back, isn't he? Like the sound of chapter 15. Bring it on.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh very exciting chapter but the suspense waiting for the lemon is even greater *hands you a bag of lemon flavored cookies as inspiration* They even come in fun snape shapes....
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That can't really be a dead end can it? Those Garrends have to be significant in some way whereof we know not yet...(lapses into sinister witch-speak).

Really exciting suspenseful chapter, but I'm in even more suspense waiting for the next chap.

Oh, and you're right about the way dates are expressed in the UK, by the way.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was a tease! Snape being half-gentleman, but not too much.

Loved the shopping trip to Diagon Alley; I really got a sense of being in amongst it all.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
totally fantastic. Lovely balance of plot and slow torturous smut build up. Waiting for updates is hard but well worth the wait. (eyes glaze over) mmmm lucky lucky Sarah
person Yria
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She is going to drink the bootle with Amortentia in the morning...right? :-) I hope so... ;-)