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for The Name in Red **COMPLETE**

by Raug397

person cecilbedemented
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesomeness! (^_^)
i can't get enough of this story
i hope you update as often as possible. i'm hooked!
person mary
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, sensual scene there; I do like a bit of post-Occlumency lemon. That was such a good idea of Sarah's, to keep pushing memories of her and Snape to the front of her consciousness - smart operator!

So Dumbledore's on the case now - I wonder what he will come up with.

I loved Firenze wearing 'serious shoes'; made me laugh.

And jealous Snape is one of my favourite incarnations, I have to admit. Very nicely done.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoot sorry i took so long to review work keeping me busy but i loved it so sweet. I think it's cute how close her and snape are becoming he even put up his pic of lily aww very sweet.
person cecilbedemented
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im writing a heroes/hp fanfic & this story was the kick in the ass to get me started. so thanks for being an awesome writer and an inspiration ^_^
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marvellous stuff. I loved the way you dealt with the Lily situation - 'time for a new letter to sit atop his wardrobe' - yes, and about bloody time too.

The 'Daily Prophet' article was veeery interesting. Seems there are still Death Eater sensibilities abroad in the Ministry. Could be some danger ahead.

Oh, and I love that Severus folded her clothes for her. What a guy.

Excellent, as usual.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while.
person Sarah
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story!
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah terrific update i like the new malfoy i don't think that he's ooc but rather a nice take on how he really might have become after the events in DH. Awesome love scene it's really hard to keep up a stories interest once the characters "hook up" but i think your doing a great job of adding in their relationship but never forgetting the big plot that keeps us reading so rather then being just a large string of smut chapters you keep it fresh and orginal so that we want to keep reading. Can't wait for the next chapter good luck on your papers
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE your story. I've spent half the night reading it, I just couldn't stop.

I really like the way you are developing the relationship between Snape and Sarah. I can't help but wondering, what will become of the stolen polyjuice potion? Will Snape realize what is going on?