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for The Name in Red **COMPLETE**

by Raug397

person magpie79
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, i am feeling the need to fan myself in the manner of a Jane Austin heroine, a swoon worthy moment if ever there was one
xx
person Marbil
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Her story about the tree attacking the bullies was very original, one of the most original I've read when a witch who has no idea that she's not a Muggle talks about her experience with strange happenings during her childhood.

I'm glad McGonagall finally mentioned sending her meals. The poor girl must not have eaten in at least 24 hours, she must have been starving. I wonder what her reaction will be when a house elf brings her meal? If I could have just one thing from the wizarding world, I'd choose a house elf. My house would love it, since I got my first computer 7 years ago I'm probably 6 1/2 years behind in my house work.
person s_blake
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first 10 chapters, and wanted to thank you for resurrecting poor Severus "I never had a life" Snape, post-DH. I'm glad to see that your heroine is showing signs of some feistiness, though The-Girl-with-Voldemort's-Eyes would probably intrigue SS no matter how mild-mannered she might be. Your writing is fluid and enjoyable. Looking forward to more!
person Jackie
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person vampkestrel
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh nice chapter mmmm snapey kissy face gotta love it. I like the fact that even though this has a lovely romantic plot you don't become overly absorbed in it you still have the characters working out the mystery and the big picture rather then throwing in a random bad guy at the end and piecing it with a evil doer monolouge. Kudos. Alot of times people lose sight of the complete story and focus on the fan service but not you! not that i don't like fan service i like it very much but the plot is the most important. that was a bit rambling all in all i love your fic so far.
person Deandra
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is just so delicious! I am loving your story! Very well written and I can't wait for more!!!!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, he kissed her, he kissed her! And he was pretty lucky that she didn't fall asleep while he was going through his lengthy internal debate ;-). Very sweet, I love his healing hands performance too. Did McGonagall realise what she was doing when she raised the green-eyed monster in Severus by comparing her to Harry?

This is building up nice and slowly; very convincing.
person Marbil
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, by the time she reached the edge of the Forbidden Forest you had me on pins and needles. I don't know anything about her, yet like Severus, you had me feeling empathy for her.

I'm leaving for vacation in two weeks and I'll be out of the country and without a computer for three weeks so I don't have much time to read fan fic now with all the packing and preparations, but I'm going to try to read all that you have posted so far. Since AFF doesn't have an update alert function, would you email me whenever you post an update? This would be very helpful to me since I plan to keep reading your story and my memory needs a nudge as I get older. I will especially need to be reminded when I get back at the end of next month, by that time I'll have forgotten what stories I'm reading.
person Raug397
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to e-mail you about updates, Trickie Woo! But your e-mail seems to be hidden and you didn't leave an e-mail address for me! >.< If you read this (which I am hoping you will!) feel free to e-mail me at Raug397@yahoo.com to leave me your e-mail address, and I will be happy to update you when I post new chapters!
person Marbil
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I still don't know anything about her. Her reaction to them reminded me of a movie, I think it was Nell but I'm not sure; anyway, the girl reacted to strangers in the same way this girl did. The girl really intrigues me, I am anxious to know more about her; but that will have to wait until tomorrow.