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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just finished several chapters. Still loving the story. I loved Snape's internal conversation with himself. Should he, shouldn't he. That was just too much! The last chapter was a bit steamy, bet Harry didn't enjoy being in that cupboard too much with them. So glad at the end, they were starting to talk to each other slightly. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter.
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drool* Loved the contact in the new chapter.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, wow, that was one of the hottest kissing scenes I have EVER read.
Absolutely divine, my dear; I really hope your classes don't interfere too much with this!
But Sev is going to be furious when he finds out about Harry's pilfering, isn't he? I wonder if he's going to find out that Sarah's implicated. Eek. She'd better learn Occlumency, like, NOW!
Absolutely divine, my dear; I really hope your classes don't interfere too much with this!
But Sev is going to be furious when he finds out about Harry's pilfering, isn't he? I wonder if he's going to find out that Sarah's implicated. Eek. She'd better learn Occlumency, like, NOW!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy mother of........... that was one fricking fantastic chapter my god if the fourplay was that good...*stares of into space drooling* sweet set up and lord have mercy what a lucky girl snape can pen me up in his store room anytime. LOL poor harry i love it when you scar his mind...hehhe
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oohhh evil cliffy i can only wonder how she's going to *cough* distract him either way as long as he falls for it will befull of snape snogging goodness so i'm happy. LOL poor snape though if or when he finds out he's might be sad and think that's the only reason she's kissing him *hugs snape and gives him a lemon cookie* Great chapter though wonderful set up for the hijinks that will soon ensue
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last chapter!!!! update soon!!!!
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this paragraph, it describes him perfectly. "Snape took a deep breath, managing to slightly master his temper. Mastering it completely would be a herculean task of epic proportions."
You started this chapter with some very atmospheric writing, it painted the picture very clearly for me. I also enjoyed the bits of humor you included. A story always needs some humor to be worth reading no matter what the 'angst queens' say, so keep it up and keep it in there.
You started this chapter with some very atmospheric writing, it painted the picture very clearly for me. I also enjoyed the bits of humor you included. A story always needs some humor to be worth reading no matter what the 'angst queens' say, so keep it up and keep it in there.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea totally awesome any reason to scars harry mind for life is fine by me hehehe ah lovely passionate chapter i'm totally envious of her.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, Harry is freaked right out.
Lovely chapter; just the very idea of taking a duelling lesson from Snape is beyond hot somehow. It's interesting that he keeps doing this kissing-and-walking-away thing. We don't have a clue what's going on in his head, which is intriguing.
Lovely chapter; just the very idea of taking a duelling lesson from Snape is beyond hot somehow. It's interesting that he keeps doing this kissing-and-walking-away thing. We don't have a clue what's going on in his head, which is intriguing.
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, now I know her name and a bit of her history, but she's still very much a mystery. I'm wondering, what is it with Minerva's fascination with the girls eyes; and what did Severus do to Sarah's eyes when Minerva was leaving? Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.