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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!!! U HAVE TO UPDATE!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE READING UR FICS THERE SO GOOD!!!! ^_~
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an Awesome story!!
It's such a feel-good piece, that has me grinning happily after every chapter - but you still manage to have depth in the characters. And, of course, *just* the right amount of sexy mixed in. haha (And I admit to adoring the changes in hair color - it's such a unique way to express a character's emotions)
I'm looking forward to the next update.
It's such a feel-good piece, that has me grinning happily after every chapter - but you still manage to have depth in the characters. And, of course, *just* the right amount of sexy mixed in. haha (And I admit to adoring the changes in hair color - it's such a unique way to express a character's emotions)
I'm looking forward to the next update.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovin it please please update or tell me where else your postin it as i have had a look on your site but i cant find it :oD
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you do not post again I am going to scratch my eyes out, most of the stuff here is either to hardcore or to strange to enjoy, yours is perfect.Keep writing.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written stuff there,a perfect blend of romance and erotics. Most stories on this site well, have no story. A lot of fluff and then some love making... very well done.
Some suggestions if I may,
1. Maybe have a chapter in which they are discovered before they make their relationship open? This would increase tension and may make a fun read.
2. Have more chapters which develop Ted Lupins personal life maybe? Might help us get a better idea of him seeing as he is only in a epilogue of Harry Potter.
Anyway well done no doubt in my mind this is the best story on the site... but it could still be improved upon.
Sincerely,
Spenser Miller
Some suggestions if I may,
1. Maybe have a chapter in which they are discovered before they make their relationship open? This would increase tension and may make a fun read.
2. Have more chapters which develop Ted Lupins personal life maybe? Might help us get a better idea of him seeing as he is only in a epilogue of Harry Potter.
Anyway well done no doubt in my mind this is the best story on the site... but it could still be improved upon.
Sincerely,
Spenser Miller
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Almost no one reads the Male/Female category, I think; I check this category very rarely. I only hit upon this fic because you posted a Severus/Hermione one recently, so I wanted to see what else you've posted recently.
in any case, all the banter is very charming. I really like that Ron isn't an ass. The awkwardness of their initial sexual encounters was appropriate, and the last one is very hot. Her thought process is realistic--she can't help making mental comparisons, even thought she doesn't have ill intentions, and awkward thoughts about going to the bathroom and such pop up at odd times.
So where are you updating then? Your website is behind aff.net, so that doesn't seem to be your main posting place either.
in any case, all the banter is very charming. I really like that Ron isn't an ass. The awkwardness of their initial sexual encounters was appropriate, and the last one is very hot. Her thought process is realistic--she can't help making mental comparisons, even thought she doesn't have ill intentions, and awkward thoughts about going to the bathroom and such pop up at odd times.
So where are you updating then? Your website is behind aff.net, so that doesn't seem to be your main posting place either.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read the prologue and the first chapter, and the story's bloody brilliant. You put a new twist on the platform scene, gave us a romantic hero that comes with built-in tensions of a kind we haven't seen yet for Hermione. And he's handsome and charming and intelligent to boot.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far - and have absolutely NO problem seeing your formidable writing talents put toward a non-PWP - but I think your choice of staying in the present tense can be a little physically draining to read. Don't get me wrong, I adore every one of your fics I've read (to the point that, in my wizard rock persona of The Muggle Studies Professor, I've written a tribute song to you), it's just that present tense can be tiring to read sometimes. Not in a bad way, just in that "I'm not used to it and have to keep adjusting myself to keep up with it" way.
Hell, you probably understand what I mean.
Anyway, I shall continue reading and enjoying this story, and I look forward to Hermione and Teddy keeping me company on many more rides home from work through increasingly-atrocious traffic jams.
Hell, you probably understand what I mean.
Anyway, I shall continue reading and enjoying this story, and I look forward to Hermione and Teddy keeping me company on many more rides home from work through increasingly-atrocious traffic jams.