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for The Magician's Trick

by ShilohDarke

schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, not to be sarcastic, but you aren't going to make us wait another two years before we get chapter three, are you?
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, now that you got me hooked..you have got to post more..i really like how this is going..cant wait to read more..please post more soon..i really like this story.
person VoraciousReader
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm very pleased that you decided to continue this. I found the first chapter sometime last year and was disappointed when there was such a long silence. I do like the idea of Lucius being so envious of his new life, gives both of them a lot more opportunities for fun and mischeif! More, please, whenever the mood strikes!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't make us wait another two years or so. Looking forward to it.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Very creative concept--love it! Please continue!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the idea for the story. i just finished reading dare to dace and i thought that was great i like the dirty talk the best. please update soon you are very good at what you do.
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really an interesting beginning to the story. I know you are dealing with your book but are you going to continue this?
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I've never read a story like this before. I love all your fics, you write your Snapes and Lucius' beautifully. Another chapter please?
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?