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for After The Ballet Is Over

by lusiology

schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hotttt.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot and heavy. Now I want to have sex on a subway train. The horn at the end and the annoucer, nice touch. I can't say the story is totally believiable though. I for one would have noticed them, I have a thing for blond and brunet couples, especially when they are both male. I would have noticed them, hanging all over each other hoping for a show. A compact, yea that's it. Use a compact to watch the action over my shoulder. Uh, I'm going to take a cold shower. Thanks for that riveting story.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jeez how am I ever supposed to hear the voice of the subway announcer without thinking of this?! That's was so unbelievably hot. I was right there with Draco, though silently I was rooting for Harry. In any case that was brilliant though I rather think if I were anywhere near the likes of them I'd discretely pull out a small mirror or something for my own viewing pleasure. Great work with this fic, very artistically done.

- Incessant_Darkness
person Annie
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit damn. That's one hell of a fantasy! I absolutely loved it! :]
person misslala
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was hot! :) Are you going to write more to it? Harry was so sexy! I love how Draco was melting in the palm of his hand... literally, LOL
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a train ride!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was insane O_O I'll never be able to think of/use the Underground again without thinking of this hahaha SO hot!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha nice well-placed horn near the end there. I find it hard to believe that the other passengers wouldn't have noticed something had that horn not been. ;) Although, personally I'm pretty sure I would have noticed. Two hot guys wrapped around each other? I think we'd all be looking, lol. ANyway, I liked it. Good job!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me while I run and take a nice, cold shower, yeah? Why do I never witness anything quite like this in real life?

With love,
Ristvak