rate_review Reviews

okay so not a one-shot goodie! update soon *kisses*

Oh my fucking god.
I love you.
Harry in drag being done by Fenrir Greyback is one of the sexiest images EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now then... if only was done by FG while he was in his wolf form while Harry was in drag...
I love this story. Truly and utterly.

good chapter.

Hehe...Now everyone knows about his outfit. Poor Harry.

I just read the two chapters and really really like this story so far. Keep going!

oh poor harry but it was still yummy *kisses*

Fenrir would totally get off on some kinky shit like that... good job, this is the only Fenrir/Harry that I've liked so far (besides my own, duh).

I was looking at the other comments, and I'm presuming that you like hearing from readers since you responded, so here is my comment: I kind of felt like this was a great one-shot, but since you have plans to continue it, I think to make Fenrir and Harry 'mates' would be cliched (I know, I'm writing one of those, but mine was the first Harry/Fenrir so I have the right to call my story original, damnit!). Practically EVERY Fenrir/Harry story after mine has been "harry and fenrir are mates and bond, yay" or the "Harry gets raped and suffers, boo hoo". I really think your story has the potential to be original, especially with the original beginning... so as an author who loves this pairing and wants to see it done right, PLEASE use your talents (which you obviously have) and continue creating your new and different take on the Harry/Fenrir relationship

Just a suggestion :)
Love Briar

will you add another chapter? id like to read it!

First of all, thanks to everyone who reviewed so far! It's really encouraging to see people who enjoy my writing!

I decided to add more to this story.
In light of that, I have been thinking of the following things:

There are so many ways I can go from the first chapter that it will take me a couple of days as to where I should go with this.

I also like really long chapters and will work on writing longer ones.

I might change the title of the story as the story grows.

I felt that the last part of the story was rushed. I was trying to finish fast enough so I could upload the story before I lost my courage to do so. Therefore, in the future, expect more detailed and longer sex scenes. I noticed I lack a lot of adjectives and noises. -_-

Dialogue! I need to work on that...

Anyways, before I start ranting on other things and losing my train of thought, the next chapter should be done no later than the end of next week. I have a lot of planning to do. However, this will ultimately end with Fenrir and Harry together. I don't think I'll make this a threesome, and I'll definitely be rereading Harry Potter for more information. If all goes well, after this story, I'll try out other pairings or other fanfiction such as Bleach :)!

Till next week!
skim

I love it!