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for Beyond the verge of Teasing

by Adrasteia

person DB1
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@2 why do you tease us like that? great chapter update soon

*DB*
person luvhp
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG< I love this, I want more, more, more Snape/Hermione is so wrong it's HOT!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
person DB1
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@1. lol awesome chapter, i can't wait to read more.

*DB*
person snape7
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I like detention fics esp. with dark and dirty snape. Update please soon !!!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon Please,
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start too your story, I'd like to see some more imagery in the next chapters. Describe thoughts, feelings and locations. This technique will help bring a reader into your world. Good luck, I look forward to the next chapter.