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for Now There Is a Bunny In My Bed

by Daktalakpak

schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, but I must confess....I'm completely confused with this last chapter!!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
Kat
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was great!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I resent that. I don't talk that much. Okay so maybe I do. But I'm glad you like them. I'm sorry about the kitten; I know how that is. My cat had kittens about two months ago. They were fine and then the runt up and decided that life wasn't worth living anymore. I've found homes for all but two of them. The tiny little boy, my mother ended up naming. George, my sister decided that it was a horrible name for a cat so she renamed it Jorge. He's adorable if you could get over the big head, tiny paws and bug eyes thing. One day he may actually look like a cat. So at the present moment I'm running a small petting zoo, three adult cats, 1 kitten that's really 6 months old, Jorge and a rabbit. We've cut down but there's still animals everywhere.

The flash back was really cute. And I liked how you kept the reception short, well short for our viewing pleasure. Now you can get down to the nitty gritty, so to speak. Lol. I noticed that you had some mistakes in this one so I'm guessing you haven't had it beta'd or reread before you posted it. Which most likely means that you wanted to let us know you hadn't forgotten us. So to that I say, "Yay." Ah, Slytherin and Gryffindor love. It's the best ain't it? And at any rate, I hope you aren't telling me you're done with this story. Au contaire, you're just beginning. I can wait patiently for the next update, haven't I waited patiently before?

Lol, in you author's note at the end when you go atm. I was like I don't understand. She's really busy automatic teller machine? Then I reread it and said, "Oooh, she's really busy at the moment. I feel stupid. Good thing no one can read my thoughts." Lol. Ah, you've got to love me.

~~Nicole (just to keep a long review short and evrerything.)
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Sooo need ch 4!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I see you aren't feeling any better. Thought I'd review again just to try and cheer you up. Hmm, don't realy know what to say. I notice that everyone has been dwindling in the updates. ike something's going around. OMG, I blame you! All the aurthors are sick and you gave it to them!

Just kidding. I haven't updated anything, I just haven't had the energy since my sister left. I'm working but it's slow. I still have a basket of clothes sitting next to me that I was suppose to hang out three days ago. Needless to say I have to rewash them. This laziness is getting contagious, my mother hasn't washed her uniform for her second job in like a week. She stinks, Taco Bell is a smelly job.

Well anyway I'll leave you be for now so you can get better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. There are so many scenarios running through my head and I'm sure none of them are right.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

~FatLady is taking a nap.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good sequal cant wait for the update
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that the argument was stupid or silly. I chalk it up to Draco's hormones. Mpreg, I'm a little iffy on it but in secret I like to read them. Shhh, don't tell my friends. I say come up with something silly and then move on to the wedding night. Hold us in suspense...I'm telling the tease to be a tease...what's wrong with me? I don't care how many kids you make them have just don't name one Albus Severus...then I'll have to kill you. God what a horrid name! Thanks for the update, I hope you feel better soon. In the mean while I have to update a few stories and finish a few challenges. You keep distracting me and I never get more then a few lines written. Not a big problem other then it's going to take me a year to write a couple one shots. The challengers will just have to get over it. Okay I really have to go now, I'm suppose to be going to the gym, and calling my sister. I'm so bad. So very bad. I'll talk to you later.

~~FatLady over and out...but not singing.

PS If you don't have a beta I was wondering if I could do it for you...MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why did it take them so long to get married? How old is their son?
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!!! the sequel. Can't wait to read the rest. You are awesome.