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for The Butterfly Effect

by YamiBakura

schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far, this is an absolute brilliant story (please finish it, lol)
person CJB
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I'm really enjoying your story so far!!! I think its well written!!! The plot you have so far is really different!!! I can't wait for more!!!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3! So the past has been changed it only slightly sooo far!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting. can't wait till you update.
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I'm not a big fan of the guy myself but the movie was really good. Strangely enough the only other person I could see doing it was Bam. Don't ask why. Okay...Is this a Harry/Draco or a Marauders story. Or maybe I'll just have to wait and see how you connected the two. Maybe it's Padfoot who wrote the note. Or maybe it's Harry. But I will not make assumptions. Although I assume that the next chapter will be up within the week. LOL.
Well we get to see hot sex between one of my favorite couples? Well I'm not picky it can be mediocre sex. *giggles* Sorry. I'm going now. I was suppose to be moving this computer but then you're story caught my eye. I'm still looking forward to see what you do with this concept.

~~Avid Remus/Sirius Shipper
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sirius/Regulus? Sounds...ewww. I'll have to read one. LOL. Okay as for this chapter I liked it. I like how they were both worried for each other. I'm glad that this is a Harry/Draco story, I'm also happy that this is a Sirius/Remus story at the same time. I can't wait till the next chapter, well I guess I can wait...but you know what I mean. Sirius is a big softie, he loves his brother and I love that about him. Although I love how he loves Remus all the more. I also love how you incorportated the books into this. I think you came up with the perfect idea to change the events in the story. Will Sirius die? Will Remus live? More importantly will Regulus die? What about the owl? I still don't understand why she killed the owl. What did Hedwig ever do to JK? Some many questions, so little answers. I'm waiting as patiently as can be expected.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Sirius/Remus Shipper

PS There are times when I'll pair Remus with Snape...I know ewww right. But it's because I sometimes like to see James with Sirius. Lily's like a Hermione for me. I don't know why so don't ask.
person misslala
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this could be an interesting stream of concious fic. :) Keep going!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its getting there im excited!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait!!