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for The Butterfly Effect

by YamiBakura

person luxeflex
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is great!
I started reading the side stories first, and then decided to read this as well.
so far: great plot and your writing style reads really nice
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I love it! This is such a neat idea, I can't wait to see how this story progresses.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just want to say I love your fanfic. Spend the whole afternoon reading it over and over again. I wish it could really happen. Sirius and Regulus are both great wizards. I don't think it's fair that J.K. Rowling makes them die in the series.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I've been abandoned. None of my favorite stories have updated in days. Are you all in a conspiracy to make me sad?! Well its working.
I check this story every day, like it won't show up on the first page. Okay, so I realy check ever hour. I'm waiting and it's not a good wait either. I'm talking to myself, I actually have time to do house work. I can find things I'm looking for, see what you guys are doing to me?!
~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

Yes I am full of myself.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And okay, so it's only been a day. But still. don't mean to rush, just super excited about the next chapter. Okay, I'm off to prepare for the gym. See you later, hopefully with a chapter to read.

~~Concieded Nicole
person Miss Nikki
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was simply amazing. I was worried there for a second that you had broken Sirius and Remus up and then I was just mad. I was battling with my emotions or whether I was happy that you were making Regulus and Sirius more brotherly towards one anthor and being just plain irate that you had broken up two of my favorite lovers. In the end you consoled me and now I see that the story had to include both the marauders and the Harry gang. I'm lookin forward to how you continue this. I'm paying careful attention.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper
person Fain
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo sooo good ^_^ But the last little bit...instead of going aw Harry's been born, I went hmm foreshadowing mayhaps? Who on earth would Regulus end up with? And now it is officially driving me nuts!
person Argo
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy, Regulus is alive, you make him interesting character every time. I'm surprised at how evil Snape in your story is, I start wondering whether he will be sorry for saying about prophecy and Potter to Voldemort, or he will stay the death eater.
I wonder why Regulus didn't sensed Frank Longbottom as pure-blood - I was absolutely sure the Longbottoms are an old pureblood family. I also wonder could anyone of them sense the dark magic of the dark mark - and if Peter has one already. What if he didn't become the death eater this time around? Or Regulus managed to discover him before betrayal? Would Voldemort in this time go and kill Longbottoms? and would Neville become the Boy Who Lived??
person Lady Lynn
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter and i am impressed with your 20 paes... i couldnt do it...this really is a fantastic story so far... i cant wait to see how harry and draco get together.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6! Sooo Regulas is alive. How does that change the future?