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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
I always struggle when trying to Sort Albus in my head. I've got him in Ravenclaw in one fanfic, and I know it's really popular to put him in Slytherin, but considering how frightened he was of it at first, you Sorted him fantastically. :3 I was also really glad to see two chapters up, and then learn that you're putting two up a DAY... *dies* I wish I could do that. I suppose that if I finished something before posting it, I could do that. Well, maybe not. I'm more of an instant gratification kind of girl, and as much as I like cliffies, I hate keeping people waiting.
I always struggle when trying to Sort Albus in my head. I've got him in Ravenclaw in one fanfic, and I know it's really popular to put him in Slytherin, but considering how frightened he was of it at first, you Sorted him fantastically. :3 I was also really glad to see two chapters up, and then learn that you're putting two up a DAY... *dies* I wish I could do that. I suppose that if I finished something before posting it, I could do that. Well, maybe not. I'm more of an instant gratification kind of girl, and as much as I like cliffies, I hate keeping people waiting.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
I STILL WANNA KNOW WHO'S IN ST MUNGOS!!!
Alright, now that's out of the way, I loved the conversation here. It flowed nicely, and still had undercurrents of tension that no conversation between the two of them should be without. All in all, I think this is turning out fantastically, and I'll be back tomorrow when you upload the next few chapters.
I STILL WANNA KNOW WHO'S IN ST MUNGOS!!!
Alright, now that's out of the way, I loved the conversation here. It flowed nicely, and still had undercurrents of tension that no conversation between the two of them should be without. All in all, I think this is turning out fantastically, and I'll be back tomorrow when you upload the next few chapters.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha they are too funny together!!! I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I am enjoying their playful banter, but also the rising sexual tension, LOL. It's very sexy indeed.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just completed the first chapter and so far I am excited! *Squee* But now, I must sleep a bit longer. haha Staying up and completing that chapter last night has me knackered more than you can imagine. :) I shall continue this around noon! LOL
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh nice. I am looking forward to whatever Harry finds... haha obviously a bit of Draco to get into him, LOL mwuhahaha is this going to break up his marriage? :P
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it lots!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it was very well written and very bold (you know, it's VERY brave to take on that epilogue and make it even remotely homosexual). I look forward to the second chapter, as I know some things that are in store lol. And I can't wait for them to happen.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one:
HURRAY!! Albus/Scorpius Friendship! Hurray! Draco/Harry acquaintanceship! Even hurray for the Ginny-bitch, who reacted quite over-dramatically, and I hated her instantly. Well done! And please update soon! Dastardly things are just my cup of tea. ^_~
HURRAY!! Albus/Scorpius Friendship! Hurray! Draco/Harry acquaintanceship! Even hurray for the Ginny-bitch, who reacted quite over-dramatically, and I hated her instantly. Well done! And please update soon! Dastardly things are just my cup of tea. ^_~
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
Who's in St Mungo's? Narcissa? And I'm mad curious about the Pure bloods thing. Can't wait for the next (nearly wrote episode XDDD) chapter! Update soon.
Who's in St Mungo's? Narcissa? And I'm mad curious about the Pure bloods thing. Can't wait for the next (nearly wrote episode XDDD) chapter! Update soon.