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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohohoh. I like this. Draco-Harry interaction and Ginny-Harry fighting in the first chapter. This promises to be good. =D.

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pure-bloods simply keeling over? This can't be good. I know my review is short but I'm itching to read the next chapter. Its brilliant so far.

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last paragraph or two of this chapter...Homg I think I died. God do I love Drarry...

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ewwwww. I hate wives. Though I must admit, clever name. Hydra Krum...the poor child. Though Albus Severus isn't that much better. I'm hooked already and I'm not even that far in. Kudos to you.

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-squees.- More Drarry interaction. I love how you've gotten their personalities down. I love how they are snapping at one another one second and chatting the next. <3.

With love,
Ristvak
person misslala
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay who's in St. Mungo's!!!? LOL I like how their dynamic is changing over the course of one full conversation. It's a nice change. Off to the next chapter.
person misslala
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I figured it was Narcissa. I am glad that Draco seems content, but puzzled by his emotions. It would seem that in this tale he "did the right thing" by marrying Hydra. Her name is very interesting, by the way. If I could keep my eyes open longer I would, but i have a lot of questions~! LOL What did Draco drink after he stepped outside? He's starting to get sick as well, isn't he? His father is already showing signs? Ginny is already showing signs as well? That's the cough?

Harry is going to get Malfoy's help as they get things figured out, they begin a strange realtionship that turns out well in the end! haha Okay that was quick, but I HAVE to take out my contacts, LOL. Long day! Anyway, I want more! LOL
person NightLo
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, even though Draco and Lucius managed to escape all the accusations or doubts over the name Malfoy, still there are too many will willingly fall for this surname...and it is really a pity for Draco to have a wife acting like this. We can see...Lucius's training on Draco to identify friend or foe is still in use...

For Harry, well, how did he feel about the meeting?
person misslala
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Molly can't have died alraedy1!!!? Wow, that was fast!!! *sniffles* THat makes me a little sad. *sniffle*

Okay, so what's next?
person misslala
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil woman!!! LOL I like this. It's very interesting indeed. :)