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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

person rachxoxo
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I definitely teared up when Draco was talking to his mother. Winderful, as always.

You told us to give you our e-mails if we wanted alerted, so here's mine tomxbigxbee@aol.com

Have fun on your trip!

-Rach
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was just waiting for this. Narcissa...rest her soul. ;0;. She really did have a huge impact on the war and the way it turned out. For that I can only respect her. I would love to be put on the alert list. Kitty_Mew_Ichigo_Berry@yahoo.com

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. I hate, hate, hate, hate, hate Ginny. I bet Harry would be pissed if he found out what she had said to him. I'm extremley worried about Lucius right now ><. Please don't kill him off too! That would be far too much for poor Draco to deal with. I think I'd cry. I love how you ended this chapter though..with Ginny being the source of Draco's torment. That touched me quite a bit. Good installement.

With love,
Ristvak
person murderaid
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor draco. tough for him, i kinda teared up.

but yeh, you said you would alert us for updates, heres my email. ilovedan4ever@hotmail.com

schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She was 'posed to get checked out! I sooo need chapter 17!!!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying your story! The pacing and the development are well planned and comfortable. I think that you have such a good talent for developing your relationships between characters and clearly conveying that development to your reader. If there is an email list for updates, I would very much like to be added, my email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.

Thank you for the stories,
Lunatic with a hero complex
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are dying out! The Purebloods are dying. They do need the Half-bloods and the Muggleborns! I sooo need chapter 19!
person murderaid
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow what a chapter. even though i feel bad for ginny, it doesn't change the fact i hate her and for keeping a secret like that from him, is pretty harsh. ooo i need next chapter, harry needs draco's comfort. yes yes
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm very much enjoying this story and would love it if you could e-mail me when it's updated! I'm pretty sure my e-mail address shows up with the review, but just in case it doesn't ~ ravenqueen55@yahoo.ca

I love Draco here; his battle with his emotions is beautiful, and so very true to life. Harry's need to be near Draco and help him is equally wonderful, and I adore the relationship between Albus and Scorpius. I'm thrilled J.K. gave us those boys! Looking forward to the next update...

RQ
person NightLo
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, feelings and emotions can be very very confusing, and tiring...hope that Draco can figure out soon...

BTW, Scorpius is way more cute and straight, and this must be the combined efforts of Draco and Albus...lastly, would you explain why James act that way?