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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

person murderaid
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow chapter 20 had me at the edge of the seat. that tension between them had my heart pounding and when he hugs him, god i wanted to cry of joy haha. i cannot wait till these two hook up, but we must have patience :]
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh! He defended Draco again. I do so love it when he does that. -sighs happily- Beautiful chapter. Is Ginny going to die? That'd be depressing...would make room for him and Draco though. Okay, that was just mean...xD.

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord. Ginny IS dying. Does that mean Lily is too? Oh I hope not. The poor innocent girl >< I cannot wait for the next chapter. You literally have me bouncing in my seat!

With love,
Ristvak
person NightLo
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...well, being a pureblood sure is difficult - and this somehow proved the assumptions that pureblood goes along with magic...though I have a different belief/assumption. However, if I dwell with this here, I believe I can write an essay of my own. So I wait for your explanation...XD

Well, lies again! Harry hates lies, Harry hates things kept blocked from him...most of all, Harry hates betrayal...can his family gain his trust back? BTW, would Draco offer him help? And is Scorpius still stay with his father?
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another super pair of chapters! Harry's reaction is wonderful, and so very very Harry. Why, oh why why why, do people always feel the need to keep things from Harry? It's a wonder the man hasn't exploded in frustration by this point in his life. And poor Draco...suffering alone. We need them together! Looking forward to the next installments...
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eek! sorry i haven't revieded in yearrs - internet troubles you know ?

wow this story is sooo brilliant
that last chapter was great, stupid weasleys i was wondering when they would appear

hope draco will accept him when he arrives at malfoy manor this time.
and i told my mum that receding hairline bit about draco and she thought it was probably just cos he was a 'baddie'
and she couldn't leave him goodlooking lol
and she doesn't like that people think he'd be hot either. oh well


gonna say this now incase my connection fails again
have a good camping trip and can't wait till you get back =]
and eek my a level results will be waiting for me when i get home in 3 days - so nervous!


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schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
3 chapters of reading...xD HAHAHA! I have somethings to say. Poor Draco. Dealing with death sucks...D: Nice henceing*cough*slash*cough*there with their kids Draft! *snicker* YAY PARASULTONGUE!! You do realize I love you more now! 8D <3

When I read chapter 17 Cannonball..I thought of the song Cannonball..Really great song. But I am glad you told us about Ginny. Do I see some single parents in this story?! HA I do. Whats funny is once again I feel alittle sad for Ginny. Look what you make me do. You make me care for her. xD It will be sad when she dies because Harry will be all emo. xD But now the poor guy is all feeling backstabed. Oh do I see some making out in the next chapter? Or some fulling around?! You just to kinda support each other but say that it meant nothing!?All though we all know this has to end with Drarry. 8D And is Harry going to do something with Dracos wand........yea....Ok hehehe I have a dirty mind. Yay we get to see James. I really like all his kids...Well in my mind I have how they all look like. xD.....wait....Would Lily......wait no because you said that the kids werent purebloods in here...and that stuff only effects the purebloods. Wow I almost gave my self a scare there. XD I hope you have fun on your Camping trip! ^^ I love Luna...she just sees everything!? xD

Also I would like to be add on you list thingy But I will email yea! ^^

~Ley
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM


GAH! It keeps cutting off my reveiws! BAD AFF! >O
When I read chapter 17 Cannonball..I thought of the song Cannonball..Really great song. But I am glad you told us about Ginny. Do I see some single parents in this story?! HA I do. Whats funny is once again I feel alittle sad for Ginny. Look what you make me do. You make me care for her. xD It will be sad when she dies because Harry will be all emo. xD But now the poor guy is all feeling backstabed. Oh do I see some making out in the next chapter? Or some fulling around?! You just to kinda support each other but say that it meant nothing!?All though we all know this has to end with Drarry. 8D And is Harry going to do something with Dracos wand........yea....Ok hehehe I have a dirty mind. Yay we get to see James. I really like all his kids...Well in my mind I have how they all look like. xD.....wait....Would Lily......wait no because you said that the kids werent purebloods in here...and that stuff only effects the purebloods. Wow I almost gave my self a scare there. XD I hope you have fun on your Camping trip! ^^ I love Luna...she just sees everything!? xD

Also I would like to be add on you list thingy But I will email yea! ^^

~Ley
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO....
How could you stop there?!?!?!?!
Goddamn clifhangers!!!!

It's okay.
Linkin Park is playing.
I'm better.

You write extremely well.
And despite the lines upward I absoloutely love this story.
person rachxoxo
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is a damn cliffhanger if I ever saw one! And as for your premature balding theory, I think you're right. No way would Draco allow himself to bald. That would be like a sign of weakness that he couldn't even keep his hair on his head. Okay..so that was weird. I'm going to be going through withdrawl for the next week now. *cries* I enjoyed the last two chapters as always and keep it up!


~Rach