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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

person rachxoxo
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was looking forward to reading this all day at work. You never disappoint. :)

I like that you add the interactions between A.S and Scorpius as well. Like you said, eleven is a bit young for seriously slashy stuff, but I'm sure they'd do some innocent stuff like holding hands and flirting. I know I did that when I was eleven. Lol.

-rach
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The scene where Albus made himself charmed to look like Scorpius, and as talking to himself in the mirror made me go "Awww.." and giggle. I really love how you show their growing friendship with one another. I'm still hooked on this story...I can't wait for more.

With love,
Ristvak
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy day! I am falling even more in love with this fanfiction. <3. I love the presents Draco gave him. Full entrance to the Malfoy Manor! And that necklace...-squees- This is one of my favorite fanfictions out there. I've now become one of your fangirls...though I think that happened maybe...24 chapters back? Maybe during the first. Well...what I think about this. Its really cute. That ending made me grin. I so love Drarry. >>;; The Albus/Scorpius interaction is really cute too. Al is one of my favorites in this fanfiction. I like how he asked Draco to take care of Harry. So cute.

With love,
Ristvak
person Ritinha
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I found this fic today and I couldn't stop reading it! It's great! The plot is very good, credible and neither Draco, Harry or the others are out of character. And of course, the sexual tension growing between them (and the promise to use Parseltongue) are huge pros to the fic! ^^
And I must say your fic touches me a lot. My grandfather died yesterday and it's been very dificult. So, knowing the you've been trough the same and the way yours characters face the deads of familiars. I don't know, it's kind of stupi but I think it helped me...
Well, big review! I'm sorry for my spelling errors, I'm portuguese and I read better than I write! ^^
Update soon please

P.S.- Oh, I love the "Draco-is-so-in-touch-with-his-feelings"!
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehe. I like where its going.

Thank you I was just wondering you know. It would seem wrong in a way...like you said they are only 11. xD

I want to know what the other meaning is...thou I think I know already. >w< I am just glad you have another story for us fans to read. It saves me from boredum and death.xD

I give you love and back up for this honor you have to go to. Stuff like that is never easy.

~Ley
person misslala
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I want to know how Draco is feeling about what Harry said. I mean, "Anything for you." is very telling, but I want to know what that anything entails. Is he willing to wait for Harry to come to him and admit his feelings? Is Harry going to blame him? Will he be angry with him? ARGH. I want to know! LOL So much going on. I liked the talk with James. I can see a big brother being like that though and of course, ROn's meddling doesn't help either. Gah. They all should know by now that prejudice only creates more problems in the end. Why can't they just get their shit together!? LOL

So I am patiently waiting for more. Because, well, that's the right thing to do. :) Can't wait for the updates and I know smut is a way off, but I don't mind. :) Let us get Harry and Draco back on track emotionally before they try for bedroom acrobatics. :) I am glad that Harry admitted he was either in love, or at least loves Draco. :) That was probably the most important thing he could have done in that moment. Thanks for writing this. :) It gives me my angst fix. :)
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord. What a way to end the chapter. I love you, honestly. -grins and runs off to read the next installment.

Much love,
Ristvak
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH. GAH. GAH. Why did they need to be interupted?! -whines- Thats not fair...though I do hope that Harry rushes off to meet Draco soon. -grins- Poor baby though. -Huggles her Harry-

Much love,
Ristvak
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 27!!! What will Draco say? What happens next? Sooo need more!
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was at work when you deside to add more chatpers. xD I was worryed that I wouldnt be able to read any of this intill wednesday! But lucky me. xD

The past few chapters have been great. I really dont have any questions well but I think like one. xD AS/S Will they be together in here? I dont know why I am asking that when its already a Drarry. xD All of my questions have been answered! Woot! More songs but Damein Rice. xD I just laughed when I read the song.

So keep up the work Draft!

~Ley