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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They kiss!!! Oh so wonderful. Not nearly enough, but wonderful! Oh...Ron. *shakes head* A bigot indeed...that's exactly what he is here. Hopefully that can be worked out...but, if not, at least Harry stood up for himself and Draco. Oh, and did I mention the kiss??? Hmmm. We need more of that kissy goodness, please and thank you!
person murderaid
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well now, that kiss was *cough* um HOT! *snickers* i laughed a bit when harry old draco how he liked his hair over his eyes :D

can we just kill off hydra and get with the steamy stuff? hahaha

ron is being a huge jerk. *throws books at him*
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32

Ahahahaha!!! You're AWESOME!! I love this update. I'm SOOO sad that i won't get to read more for a while, but OMG keep up the updates. When my internet returns, I want at least six chapters up. And I'm already working on a sequel to looking and touching, though it's a H/D not AS/S. Good luck with your two awesome chapters a day. :3

person misslala
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the family Mr Potter!!! Okay, that promises so much. :) I am in love. haha As I am sure that Harry is but won't admit it. haha this is awesome!!!!! :P I love every crooked step and only want more. :)

I like how Harry let his guard down for just a moment and told Draco to leave his hair, that he liked it better that way. That is so good. :) so good~! hahaha I love it. :P

Okay, so now to kill the beast... get Harry and Draco together... figure out if there is going to be some Albus/Scorpius mess in there... Get Ron's attitude adjusted majorly... lots of things going on woman! Feed me, LOL I need more. :P
person Lacegag
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good. And I know this sorta goes back against what I said earlier, but are they ever gonna shag? There's defenetly some tension...I need fulfillment!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow Hydra really IS mad!
and Harry was getting jealous, bless!
I hope you will be able to keep posting 2 chapters a day but don't wear yourself out!
x x
person Ritinha
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I love the expression "organized chaos", I use that a lot! ^^
Ron is being so stupid and thick headed, please make Hermione throw something at him (a book) so he can have is brains back again(?)!
Uuuh, I'm so excited to read about the Big-Snack-Hunting! eheh And that kiss... wow! Gimme more! And Parseltongue <3

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person rachxoxo
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know how you've been able to write two chapters a day. (It's probably because you follow an otherworldly muse that I've been unable to seek myself.) This is my new routine: come home from work, change clothes and park my ass in front of the computer to read your story. It'a the highlight of my day, really. I'm a lifer to this story.
(Okay, so my mind follows some strange tangents sometimes. I blame it on Pennsylvania's drinking water.)

-Rach
person Lacegag
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderfully well written story. And I'm quite captivated by it. I love how you made Albus befriend Scorpius and put him in Slytherin. It's a very nice touch. I also want to add that I'm glad that you'e put so much effort in this story. I've only mde it to chapter 5 so far. But most authors would have Draco and Harry rolling around naked on the floor by now. So, it's much appreciated. Very lovely.
person Extraho
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh!that was an evil cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!