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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a chpater. so romanctic, yet sexy and hot too :D

as i reading it reminded me of this fan art i saw of harry and draco, with the postion they were in.

heres wat i'm talking about
http://i3.tinypic.com/67oeb2v.jpg
person misslala
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's all you get from me! :P (j/k) Wonderful! I'm so happy that Harry said he loved Draco, too and that Draco was weary about taking it further WITHOUT Harry returning the sentiment! :) How wonderful!!!! :) Thank you! :) That was very enjoyable.
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! *does happy dance* This was an absolutely beautiful chapter and a deliciously wonderful love scene. So rich with emotion...it really poured through in your words. I'm glad Harry got to be taken care of...he's not gotten enough of that, and Draco does it so very well. I loved this chapter...fantastic job!

As for sites ~ The Hex Files is by far my fav H/D site, both because of the layout and the quality of fics that they archive. I'm also a fan of Skyehawke and The Silver Snitch. You should post this fantastic story as many places as you can!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo,Bravo. This was by far, one of the best chapters I have ever read. The emotion towards the end was amazingly emotional. I cried for Draco and Harry. Please update again as soon as possible, I need more.

~ rAiNwAtEr ~
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was just amazing. had me kinda teary eyed, and draco telling harry he loves him. awwwww
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a wonderful chapter! More Phoenix lore, their fight, their making up...all good things! I loved the declarations of feelings...Harry admitting his want, Draco admitting his love. Just extremely well done...good job, you! The kiss at the end??? FINALLY! Finally, Harry is taking control of what he wants. I'm sure there's still angst aplently to come, but I'm thoroughly hoping the boys don't back away from what they've accomplished here. As always, I can't wait for more!
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 42! Sooo Harry knows but will he admit his feelings to Draco?
person rachxoxo
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The perfect thing to come home to at the end of a shitty work day. And now I'll have to wait until tomorrow probably to read the next chapter(s). Great. Thanks alot. ;) Kidding, of course.
person misslala
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm such a dork, cause I'm kinda crying, but Im happy. :) Good chapter! I think that they deserved that. I like how Draco came to terms with his feelings and I'm assuming that Harry accepts his admission if he kissed him. :) *warm heart* This makes me feel so good to read. :) I don't know why. hehe thank you!!! And them being naked was just great, so who cares, hehehe. More soon, please?
person Lacegag
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last few xhapters were wonderful. I loved how you tied the phoenix lore together in this. I can't wait for more!