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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

person rachxoxo
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the mention of the Jabberwocky. That has to be one of my favoritest poems ever.

The chapter was lovely, as always.

If you ever need someone to talk to, you have my e-mail. I've been told I'm a good listener and give good advice (if needed)

-Rach
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My heart goes out to you too, lovely authoress!

oh and btw - can i also ask for e-mail alerts?
my adress is: lars.jiyae@gmail.com

pretty please?
person misslala
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UGH!!! Harry! Why does he have to be so dense? He's just clueless as hell. And Draco, being the great prat that he is... making things worse. Why do you always keep me guessing. I mean, I know that they wouldn't just fall into a routine and all that immediately... but come on! haha you little sneak you. :P
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 44! Where else would Luna live? And the paintings! Hmmm.
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a great chapter, Daft! I was concerned about the morning after awkwardness (which you wrote so well!), worried they would try to downplay what had happened and attempt to go back to the way things were before. I'm so glad they didn't! And I can't believe I didn't realize they were in the Forbidden Forest! *smacks self in head* OF COURSE that's where they are! I can't wait for the next update...

I don't know what's going on with you, and I don't know why you aren't feeling the best emotionally and physically, but just know that I'm thinking of you and wish you the best. I hope whatever (or whoever) ails you moves on soon. *hugs*
person rachxoxo
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo glad that Harry reciprocates Draco's love, I was worried there for a moment. I have to say tha this is the first 'sex scene' that I have ever read that made me want to cry. Not in a bad way, of course. I am glad that you've built up this story around them because it made it all the more meaningful. And before I say something completely psychotic, I'll just say to keep up the excellency.

-Rach
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story keeps getting better and better. just keep writing and then everyone will be happy. good job. VM
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! They both know how the other feels! I sooo need chapter 43!
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely! Now, is the sh** going to hit the fan? I can't help but want to hide away thinking for their reactions in the aftermath. They fought it for so long it just doesn't seem like they will take it well. I can hear a hundred excuses falling from their lips. I would love to be wrong but..... Anyway, loved it.
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
they did it!

i was wondering though, you've only been writing from Draco's POV for the last few chapters.
will you go back to doing it from Harry's too or keep it all in Draco's?