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for What Shakes The Elephant

by Angelsfear

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wouldnt have guessed theodore nott.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just wondering can the portaits of harry parent's and that talk ?
xx
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i got all teary eyed when they came across fred's portrait. his death effected me the most :[

ah well, and snapey. ah i missed him. haha glad yo're updating again. i can't get enough of the story.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Fred's portrait had me sniffling just a little. Poor, sweet Fred...And the Dumbledore/Snape banter was delightful! Another great chappie!
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 47! I don't know. All those past headmasters and mistresses are able to talk in the head office. Lily and James might be able to talk to him. But their memories are of sooo long ago. What would they say to their adult son?
person misslala
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Theodore Nott!!! Potions Master!? Whoa! That's a shock. Okay, Hogshead... please tell me they get two rooms, sneak into one or the others and shag senseless? (I'm a smut kick at the moment, mind me not! I didn't even care until I started writing it in DT, so now OUT WITH IT) That deserves at least one smile :) Do indulge me!

I like how Snape was still snarky, and it's good to know that they will see their children while at the school. :) How sweet. They keep getting closer and closer to little things along the way, incluiding one another and it's awesome. :) This is terribly brilliant!!! And I'm gushing, I shall stop now. :)
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 46! Portrait or person?
person misslala
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I rather liked this chapter as well! Fantasiticly played! :) I like how sweet they were and I liked the portraits! I was so glad there was one of Dobby :) That made me happy, and the inscirptions :)

Their kisses are sweet and I like that short dive into Draco's psyche and his discomfort with Harry's sweet gestures.

Why did it hurt Draco when Harry touched him? I think he's starting to become affected by his family's curse. :( I don't want Draco hurt, dammit! *huggles him* I hope you are able to update soon, and that Harry and Draco have another yummy interlude :) Cheers!
person rachxoxo
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter alot (but when don't I?) I REALLY like how Harry isn't running from his feelings now. It gives me warm fuzzies inside. Draco's humor at the statue was spot on. Can't wait for more (but obviously I'll have to)

-rach
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like this? I LOVE this! And one thing I've learned is that though life goes down the shitter sometimes, it tends to bob back up to the surface ^_^ hang in there
AND KEEP WRITING!! It keeps me sane! School is evil! This is my reprieve