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OMG! What the hell is going on with Harry and Norische?!?!? Was Harry suppose to have been Norische and Chris's mate, instead of Draco? or Does Norische has more then just two mates?

I really want Harry to be Kain mate!!! Please let Harry be his mate pretty pleeeeeeeaaaaaaassse!!!!

Please update chapter 29 ^_^

Maybe he was protecting a possible mate. Harry may have suppose to be Draco's Veela mate. But, they did that ceremony that stopped Draco taking a different mate. Or, he could be a possible mate for the Vampire King. If not, then is Harry related to them?

Just when you think you know what might happen next, you find out you were wrong. So, why is Nori so protective of Harry?

The last two chapters were excellent. I liked Nori going all vamp to protect everybody. He can't decide if he's big and bad or clingy to his mates. Next chapter should be interesting with the upcoming conversation. Nice.

CHAPTER 27: Wow. That's honestly all I can say. And that I want to find out what's going to happen next!! Thanks you so much for updating :) Made my day, I was sooo tired from school and swim practice.

~Spirit

Chapter 20:

Goddess you scared me so bad with this chapter! At least he's awake now, and he hasn't missed Christmas... I'm looking forward to reading about that! Yay! :)

~Spiritxx

CHAPTER 21 - Aww.. Draco got talked to... I feel so sorry for him, I mean, he's kinda been thrust into everything. He can't be expected to remember every single last detail, it's not like he was brought up in the vampyric way :(

CHAPTER 22 - Ahhahahaha I looooved the scene with Lucius!!!

CHAPTER 23 - Oh wow... I've fallen in love with your description of Nori's mansion. I wanna live there!!!!! hehe, it's insane! I love it! Great writing too, keep it up! I'm continually amazed at the originality you bring into this, it truly blows my mind.


~Spiritxx

CHAPTER 24

Woah. First, I must say, this is an amazing story, and it reached my favorites list within the first five chapters. I love the originality there is in there - it almost belongs in the 'Originals' section, apart from the use of the HP characters. Except for a few spelling mistakes and periods when there should be commas, your writing is really really good. I love your descriptions and how you've developed each character, both your own and the HP ones.

Ch. 19: I'm glad his grandfather is out of the way because he was just a downright heartless bastard. I'm excited to read about the developments, now that Sev's been called to Voldemort... Goddess, Nori has already been through so much in the little time he's been at Hogwarts, it's unfair that it should continue, although I will continue reading tomorrow (I'm just dropping with fatigue haha!)

~Spiritxx

great OC
don't like the fact that Ron and Hermione got back together.