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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Keep it up.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that answered some questions. I thought Harry was Draco's mate. I can't see Harry doing all that bowing and stuff. He will give respect, but I can't see him bowing to Nori's grandmother and Kain. Given Harry's past and his feelings on how people bow to Voldy....don't see that happening no matter how you write it. Also, if she ever goes to beat on him...it ain't gonna be pretty!! It's took me a long time to get into this story. If Harry ends up bowing and scraping to them or letting that outdated woman beat him, I think I would have to give up reading this.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure Harry will feel like he is intruding upon the other two. Chris seems interested but I'm sure Draco will not be so easily swayed.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see the next chapter soon. Kain and Harry? Or Harry and Nori and mates? Was Harry Draco's mate before they bound his creature from taking a mate?
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
new reader
wow this is very very very good and intreresting story
i really like it
keep going and post soon
bye bye
wow this is very very very good and intreresting story
i really like it
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29 - I'm intrigued to hear the next part of this discussion. This chapter's been really interesting, and I loved the idea of Dumbledore running around with a target hahaha that made me laugh out loud.
Hope you've been having Happy Holidays and here's and early Happy New Year to you! *toasts*.
~Spiritxx
Hope you've been having Happy Holidays and here's and early Happy New Year to you! *toasts*.
~Spiritxx
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very wonderfully done Norische, Im no grammar nazi, and no complainer for any percularities of writing format.
(Feel free to sigh in relief.) I love the story you have been working on, and will continue to enjoy it more as you keep posting. Its definatly a great piece of work, and a pleasure to read. Keep it up, Im semi predicting what may happen with Harry, and im curious to find out which of the two idea's may happen, or if theres a third your going to suprise me (atleast) with.
(Feel free to sigh in relief.) I love the story you have been working on, and will continue to enjoy it more as you keep posting. Its definatly a great piece of work, and a pleasure to read. Keep it up, Im semi predicting what may happen with Harry, and im curious to find out which of the two idea's may happen, or if theres a third your going to suprise me (atleast) with.
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Voldemort is a nutcase. But I like your description of him being absolutely raging furious.
Keep up the great writing!! :)
~Spiritxx
Keep up the great writing!! :)
~Spiritxx
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still confused about what the relationship is between Nori and Harry. Nori said he didn't see Harry like that so, I'm thinking they are brothers. I was hoping if he wasn't nori's mate, he was the king's. But, they haven't interacted at all. I don't recall them even speaking to each other.