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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHH! Couldn't you just let Harry be his mate? They all get along.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First time reading this. I am a Harry/Darco as a couple fan, so it was difficult imagining him with them. I kept thinking he would take Harry as a mate, but I was wrong. Also, for someone to be so dedicated to his mates, he had no problem looking at Harry and Blaise when they were naked. I know the ceremony called for nudity, but he was definitly looking at their dicks.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a chapter. Ron was being a jerk. I liked how Harry got Nori to let go of Ron. Poor Draco is scared of the spanking that I'm sure at some point he will get. Their do seem to be alot of rules for Draco to learn. I can't wait for the next chapter, since it hints at Nori still needing more mates. Though I would hate to have to keep 3 mates happy.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Ron had better run and hide now that Snape is after him. Nice ceremony. Nice description of Harry and Blaise. I loved that they got to come to.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. Draco seems a little out of character being so extremely nice but that could be due to Nori's influence. I could feel for the boys during that exam. I hate exams like that. Does Nori know about Harry's being the whole boy who lived and all the problems he has had? I'm glad you stated when school was going to start, I was beginning to wonder if classes were going on during their medical exams.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the long chapter. Great job. Sounds like Chris and Norishe can get pregnant or all of them can. I loved the scene with Siruis and Norishe. It seems that he likes Harry's scent also. Is that because like he says he likes all guys or is Harry going to be special too. Interesting story.
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story idea. It is very interesting. Though I'm disappointed that the third person in the tribond will be Draco. I was hoping for Harry. But I like it. I just don't like the thought of a Malfoy being an immortal is all. But I digress keep up the good work. Its nice to see a story from oc point of view that fits into the plot so well.
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They bought more clothes than I have. I wish they woould have bought me some. Especially the leather.
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I like the interaction. A foursome will be great.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I may make one critisim, you are overdoing your character Norische. He's too perfect; you need to address some of his flaws. For example, he exceles in potions but is dreadful in Transfiguration or maybe something mundane like cooking.