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omg please write more! this story is really interesting! and btw i think that she should be alive but obliviated or had been held prisoner for a long time also the only spelling error i could find was when you kept saying finely instead of finally i dont know why anyone would say that you were makin a bunch of spelling errors anywho lol could you please email me when you have posted more? angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com

I'm so loving it. Can't get enough! Ready for more. Draco's mother should be bad, it's a good look for her. Not really sure who should switch sides. I'm ready for more Harry/Severus lovin;-) Thank you for writing.

totally love the story and just to throw my 2 cents worth in. I think you should have Lucius mum found in dumbledores house in a aura rade, looked in a dundgen.

don't know about kathy would like for her to be alive. i can see cassy ageist them. i defiantly think neville, luna, fred, gorege, and a lot of the muggle born will go to there side.

Hi I just read all 16 chapters and i think its a great story. I dont think narcissa should be brought back you already set her up as abad mother in trying to give draco to old moldy wart.

as for lyn i think if she was alive she would have come forward sooner unless she has no memory of her life at all.

I think most of the death eaters should come over except for wormtail, bella, narcissa, and greybeck

Thank you again for a great story

I went through and read all 16 chapters, and yes I owe you 16 reviews, I would like to throw in my two knuts.

You've already made Cissa sound like the baddy, when you said she offered Draco to the dark lord, you would have to do a lot to clean up that mess.
Maybe Lucius needs a devorce, he wouldn't be the first.

Lyn? Depends where you want to go. Lucius, Harry, and Draco can bond in there grief when they find that Lyn's body was thrown in an un-marked muggle grave, when she was killed trying to save Ayden. OR!!! Lucius can find Lyn in the mental ward in a hospital in France. Maybe Lucius can find a love interest in the pretty little nurse taking care of his mum??
Good story, let me know when you update @ karasufuyu@yahoo.com

harry grandmother should be alive yes cissa should be on the malfoys side all the way and all the pureblood except wormtail bella should get om harry' side. and anyone that help to hurt harry should pay. the dursley shouldn't be killed but place in jail or prison

beside cissy can only be bad if you put luc with sirius or remus or severus and harry with viktor krum or marcus flint

Depends on how you want to play it. I know Cissa's was probably an arranged marriage but feelings can grow from that. So, yeah, i'd be having her side with her family. Bella is compeletly off her rocker so she can probably stick with voldi tho. Would Lyn being alive contribute much to the plot? Unless she was a prisoner, in hiding or obliviated, wouldn't she have come after her child?

oh please update soon this has got me hooked want more