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for what is evil

by mysteriouscloakedstrangers

schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I can't wait for that promised lemon. Love your story. Until the next chapter! :)
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...more please? I just adore this *hearts* I hope inspiration and opportunity find you soon. ^_^
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it can't wait for more
person anniea
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting please update soon who does the lemonyness apply to in the next chap? *wiggles eyebrows* pwease update soon *kisses*
person Kaitlyn
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a few spelling mistakes like hear/here, but nothing else really.
will you be making Voldemort hot again? i ask this every time, but i love Hot!Voldie and Rejuvinated!Voldie.

Can't wait for the lemon!!!
>; )
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well first of all if you want Voldie to be the good guy sorta you will need to temper his judgement through Harry. Nagini's a cool character use her too. If you think about it going by Rowling's discriptions at the moment both Harry and Voldemort are immortal. (Random thought) I think Sirius needs to come back, he was my fav. character. And so far you haven't turned him into a back guy yet. (Cheers) Oh and the twins too, cause in my opinion they are just plain awesome. (Yeah, *sarcastic* Great arguement I know)
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you, a nice first chap and a totaly new view of Lilly and James. Poor Harry see something like this about his "loving" parents.
greets Loki
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Voldy sure is't doing anything to gain Harry's trust. He's treating him like a prisoner and a tool, just like Dumbles.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAGGGHH!! I can't stand that there's nothing more to read of this story right now!! I LOVE it!! Please update again soon as is convenient for you. Can't wait for the next chapter. Until then! :)
person Vittani
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, ony thing is, i think the last few lines needed a bit more detail. But other than that it was brilliant, i cant wait to read the next part.

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