AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters 1 to 8

Cool story so far. I enjoy the humor of BtVS mixed into the world of HP--well done! Keep up the good work, don't get discouraged, and don't worry about the variances of spelling between USA and UK. (It is the improper usage of punctuation (whether commas or quotes themselves), either not enough or too much, that gets confusing. At the moment I don't recall if you have any such errors.)
;-D
Ta