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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. Very good story. They admit it finally!!!!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to point out a mistake that jumped out at me, but through the fluffiness of this I seem to have forgotten it. Oh, well that just means that it wasn't important anyway. I liked it, it was cute and sweet...and a lot more then I imagined when I read the title. You should continue this if you haven't already.
~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I think Harry loves him too.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was beautiful. I loved how your Draco was confident in a subtle way...that's very hard to write. And the description on Harry's eyes was not something I've read before. I actually think that was a good place to stop, but it wouldn't hurt to have Harry's POV :] Lovely job!!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I so like it!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand frantically* Yes, yes, yes, here's someone interested! Here, can you see me?
Continue, please!
Continue, please!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely interested. It would still be great even if you left it where it was. It really was a great read
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jbj1031965
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh theres definitely an interest, that was beautiful. The description of Harry's eyes was exquisite. You really captured a deep essence of feeling there. You could clearly see it was more than a crush. Please continue it.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. I would love it if you continued it. It's so sweet and the sex was hot. Very well written. Can't wait to read more from you.