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for Why Do You Torture Me?

by youhavenopoweroverme

person Jan
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know this story reminds me of this song from when I was little, back in the 80's. I was like 7 or 8 and my mother use to hear it all the time.

It was where she(the girl in the video/song) was cheating on her husband and was planning to leave him. He confronted her about someone calling their home, while she was out and told him all this, of course she denied most of it. She said that she was never planning to leave him, that she had last spoken to the guy years ago, that he was making things up. When he got tire of her cheap excuses he confesses that the man that she was planning on running away with had been him all along. That he was that man that she spoke to on the phone when he was at work that it was he that she met in a secluded dark park, or the random hotel that they share.

He had been wearing a disguise and always meet in dark places, so that she couldn't tell it was he all along. Don't ask why I thought of that song but it kind of reminded me of it.

Anyway I am so far enjoying the story, I really hope Harry doesn't do something stupid that he'll regret in the end. A kiss can be forgiven, if told right away, but infidelity? Never. Hope to see chapter 5 updated soon.
person Sheree
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If Harry loves Draco why does he need to think the offer through? What a creep! If Harry has to cheat on his partner then he's a no good bastard who's not good enough for Draco.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay so Harry's a bastard...and Teagan's a tramp...the two of them deserve each other...Draco needs to go out and find a man who will treat him right and not think its okay to kiss someone else, let alone think about sleeping with someone else
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry is going to cheat on Draco! He had better tell him about the kisses. If Tegan does then Draco is going to leave him. Ask Draco if he can sleep with him or have a threesome. Sooo need chapter 5!