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for Wash Away The Pain

by youhavenopoweroverme

person ZooArmy
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what I should think of your story. It's not like I wouldn't like it or something, but I've some issues with cutting and the extent of it in your story. It's almost glamorising it. I know there are people that will like this, but I'm not one of them.
Please don't take this as flame or something. I once used cutting in one of my stories as well, but not this casual. I just wanted you to know, becasue I think it's only fair to tell you that it's not becasue of your style or anything, but because of some content of the story that I prolly won't read more of this story.
I hope your not mad. Good luck with your story!