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for The Change

by SFPANTHER

schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more to see how Bella takes her punishment and also to see what they do with Harry.
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back. Its been a while since you update, but this chapter did not disappoint.
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was awesome! i can't wait for dark to kick some light ass!
person yeiko87
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great (of what I've read so far). Normally I would turn away from seemingly O.O.C. Voldemorts, but this is done tastefully :p my only criticism thus far is to remind you to mind your "your/you're"s and "loose/lose"s. To loose is to make something less tight. Many people make this mistake in spelling. I'm just weird and have a pet peeve about them haha ^^ good job so far.
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all thanks for thinking about the story even while you are planning to move!
Good Luck with that :)
I sincerely hope all of my faves remain unharmed LOL so i cant wait to see how it continues :)
No matter when you update...ill be around to read it :)
Jocy
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Luck with your move. I absolutely love this story. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short, but to the point. I like it. I can't wait to read more. Good luck on the move sis!

Love ya,
Tiffany
person Citten
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
trval safe and i hope that you happy and everything gets there in one piece. :) thank you for the chapter-i truely enjoyed it even though it was short. i am really glad that this story has lots (hope a tons) more to it than just the battle so on with the story as the saying goes. i will be waiting, very happily and impaiently. :)
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.
im soo glad you're back.
i hope things are getting better.