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for The Change

by SFPANTHER

schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read this story. I can only hope a plot bunny will chase your heels again so we can read more of your work.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story. I am glad that Harry ended up with Pansy and fathered several children. I loved how Hermione told Severus that she was expecting again. I enjoyed reading this story.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. Yay to happy endings
person MsTree
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story very much when I read it today, but was unaware that it had not been beta'd until reading your notes at the beginning of each chapter.

I am not an accredited beta, but I do know my grammar and am adept in spelling. If you want me to go over the story and make corrections so you can possibly post to other archives, I am more than willing.

Please e-mail me and let me know one way or the other.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved it so much. Cookies to each and every page.
person amsev
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such an interesting story! And don't force yourself to write longer chapters if your muse isn't cooperating. I loved your author's notes where you and the characters dialogue.

I do wish the guys would wear their ladies' brands, too. Seems kinda rough that the women had to go through that and almost become like property without claiming some property of their own! But that's just me. Like equal opportunity stuff!
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Sounds like Harry gets one hell of a good deal! LOL! I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more sis. This story rocks!

Love your lil sis,
Tiff
person DB1
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@19 awesome, update soon

*DB*
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright where is chapter 19 because I need more. Much, Much More. Give me more please? Luv Sin!!!