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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Besides everyone being completely out of character, especially Hermione, I think the story is very enjoyable. It's very light. The only person remotely in character is Severus...I can understand Hermione wanting to be neutral but everyone else who'd gone over, I didn't quite understand their reasoning. Especially Charlie Weasley. The Order just seems to not really function without the support of Hermione. They've essentially taken her for granted. But I'm really sure they could function without Hermione because they did before the fall of Voldemort (Harry at one year old) and she wasn't even born yet. I guess, they needed an effective leader with Dumbledore gone. Voldemort and his Death Eaters seem too nice and tame but otherwise, they were hilarious at times.

One thing to keep in mind grammatically, is the difference between "your" and "you're." I noticed that you repeated several times this mistake. You wrote "your" when the sentence required "you're" instead. "Your" is possessive and similar to "my," "our," "his" and "her." You should insert any of these to test if you are using the correct form. "You're" stands for "you are" and if the sentence makes sense with "you are" then you're using the correct one. If you need a beta for future stories, you can feel free to email me.

Anyways, the story was enchanting (almost like the ceiling of the Great Hall!) and very enjoyable read!!

Another awsome story sis. I loved how you ended it. It rocks! I can't wait to read another HP story. I'd read your Bleach stuff, but you know I don't follow it. Which is only fair since you don't read my Star Wars stuff. lol. Great work sis!

love ya!

I have really enjoyed this, and I could see the plot past the whoopsies; and they didn't bother me. (Which is saying something, as I am a beta!).

May I give you my tips for capturing your muse?
1) a nice hot bubble bath with lots of bubbles.
2) a rather large slice of triple chocolate gateau.
3) lots of candles.
4) soft music.
5) a glass of wine (though, mine is non-alcoholic)
6) the phone off the hook.

Mix the above 6 together and I find that my muse comes flooding into my brain with plots! Plus, you deserve to kick back and relax! You've been through a lot and deserve the calm. You've stayed strong and are a credit to yourself.

Kind Regards and best wishes.
Utopia.

thanks for the ending it was good and wrapped everything up but i could have had more (but i could always have more!) :) i will be looking forward to the next story when it comes! hope all is well with you, and may it continue to be. :)

I haven't reviewed any other chapters as I am in the middle of work and having a break. Hoewever, your A/N in chapter 6 saddened me. I wish you all the best for your family and yourself; and I think you were right to be angry with someone pestering you over the fic.

I write for my own pleasure, and I only share my stories so others can also find pleasure in them. When writing becomes a chore rather than something I enjoy, I stop and let the plot go. Write for your own pleasure, everyone else be damned!

Again, I wish you all the best, stay strong and keep smiling.

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I too have watched as life support was turned off, and I understand how utterly heartbreaking it is.
I wish you well, and I hope that you stay strong. I know it hurts, but remember the good memories where you can.

Best Wishes.
Helen.

I think this is one of the best fics out there. I cannot believe that you had the wherewithal to get this whole thing completed with all of the changes in your life. I hope that things have calmed down for you and that 2008 is not as stressful as the past months have been. Good luck to you.

Love the ending, I like how it all turned out for the better.