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for The Change

by SFPANTHER

schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Goddess Honey, If push comes to shove...screw the story, family always comes first. It's a great story, but you and your father comes first. I hope he comes through this with flying colors and I hope that your biopsy is clear. Please let me know how you and he are doing.

Brightest Blessings!

Red
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry for your step-father. I hope he doesn't suffer too much. If you can't update for a while, its ok. Take care of your step-father and update when you can.
person Apryl
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You take care of yourself and your family FIRST! The rest of us will still be here. If you feel up to it post a small author's note from time to time to let us know how you are doing. Health and family should always be the first priority. Anyone who has a problem with that, well... they can just F*CK OFF!!
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As usual a wonderful bit of prose. I am so sorry to hear of your dad's illness and yours as well. All I can do is remember you in my prayers. I am also sorry that you had a reviewer who was, shall we say less than tactful, sometimes people talk without thinking as I'm sure was the case here. Keep your spirits up and I'll read the next chapter as soon as you can post it. God bless you and your family.
person kmplease
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is so good, please update soon
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is just awful!! i understand how you feel. if you ever need anyone to talk to i'm here. my brother had cancer, really, this isn't an empty offer, talk to me anytime! aim - terranmedic101

now, your story! omg, amazing update! i love that we're finally getting to the feelings! i can't wait to hear about what narcissa says! update soon!
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the only other story I'm giving my *****five chocolate chip vote to*****. I think that its a great story and I love how you wright.
person kmplease
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, down the rabbits hole!! whats on the other side of the door? love your story please update soon!!
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so there is many out of character moments from the very beginning but I kind of like it. for whatever reason i have pretty much always liked the stories where there is more to voldemort then we thought/knew. and im not against 'good' malfoys. so there are some spelling grammar mistakes but everyone has those i think for what this story is, it's wel written and thought out. i just read all the chapters you have up and i look foward to catching some more when available. have fun writing
person DB1
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@5. great chapter update soon

*DB*