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another brilliant addition to what is now one of my favorite stories.
and i enjoyed sticking up for you. i hate when people assume things and say hurtful things to other. pshh i sound like one of those miss americas.. haha. but anyways. i am glad that you are healthy and as i said before i will keep your family in my prayers.

@7 someone knock sense into ron. hes such a bastard. awesome chapter, update soon

*DB*

Family always comes first most of everyone here understands that and will stick with you no matter what.

Now on with the review, Ron is an idiot!! But don't torture Charlie by sending him to Romaina LOL. Great twist, will Hermione be able to handle Severus's fantasy. Will we see everything in the fantasy? Yes my mind is in the gutter today :)

Love your story and let me just say that Ron is a complete idiot. He is lucky Severus left him alive. I want to read more about what Severus and Hermione are doing.

this is a brilliant story.
i can't wait for the next update, but i understand that it might be hard for you to get it out for awhile. i will keep your dad in my prayers.. i know how hard it is seeing as i know many people that have cancer. i can only hope for the best for you and your family!

Great chapter! I love how you have Severus completely whipped by Hermione and he doesn't even realize it yet! LOL! It's great!

As for the person you mentioned, they must not be a true friend if they were more concerned about you continuing your stories as opposed to the health of your dad. Don't let them get to you.

Love ya,
sis

I like it. Please update soon.

Frist off I want to say how dare you be mean to someone by draging them in the mud because of one little fucking thing they said. when they are not around to tell their side. And from what I read in this chapter your a person who wants nothing but fucking pitty and everyone to feel sorry for your ass. Well your not the only one who has shit happen to them. How about I tell a you fews things scine you seem to like pitty from everyone I miscarry a baby at 5 months and my friend who was gay killed himself because his family disown him.

i just am commenting towards "queentheunderground"
she was obviously not asking for pitty of any sort what she was obviously saying is that she will not put the story in front of her familys health. whoever does not get that has serious issues. lets put it this way.. if you were to write stories would you be writting the story when you baby was misscarriaged or after your friend commited sucide.. cause i know i wouldnt.. so she is not going to be writing as much but she will try.. she is worried about her dads health and no one should put her down for that.

I hope he gets better fast.