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*fans self* oh baby that was so kinky and hot!! i loved it!! update soon!

I like it. Please update soon.

Hi! I don't think I've reviewed yet, but I do love your story. Lots.

That being said, I'd like to respond to something you wrote in response to bad reviews you're getting. You said While I also understand the freedom of speech, what I don't get is why flamers feel the need to flame stories. If they don't like it, they shouldn't have read it.

Now on the one hand, I understand. I don't understand why people feel the need to be rude or mean even if they don't like the story. But to say that if they don't like something, they shouldn't read it. Well, that doesn't make any sense. People, in general, aren't psychic. So how do they know they won't like something until they read it? And while I do believe in the whole 'if you don't have something nice to say, don't say it at all' thing myself... people can review a story anyway they like. The text says, 'review' not 'compliment.' So I don't really think it's fair to only expect good reviews. I know I don't. But then again I don't fancy myself some great writer, so if I got flames I'd simply ignore them. I write for myself and anyone that happens to like what I write as well is just the cherry on top. By talking about the flames in your new chapters I think perhaps that is just fanning the flames.

I hope you don't take offense. Like I said, I think you're story is great. And any naysayers shouldn't really matter in light of the fact that there are many more who actually enjoy your story.

loved the update, hoping the next will be soon!

i'm so glad you're tests were normal! and to queen of the undergound.... it didn't seem to me like she wanted pity, it just seemed like you did. omg, wah? i lost a brother, grandparent, great grandparent, cat, lizard and aunt in the last 3 years. go cry to someone that cares and quit dissing on an author. you're such a loser.

anyone, chapter was great! update soon!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So finally I'm reviewing, hey?

I signed up so I could review this, because your story has -so- much potential to go far.

I know, I'm a hypocrite, even though you don't know me. I can say this, because even though I don't have any trials going on in my life at the moment, I've stopped updating my story (Another site, another place, another time.)

So before I go on to give what I -hope- is constructive criticism, you have to remember firstly- I'm a wannabe British Aussie.(We all are, at heart, I think.)And secondly- I'm enjoying your story immensely. I'm SO glad things are looking up for Voldy for once.

So, onto it! I'm not sure whether you're writing when you're tired or stressed (I'm guessing the latter from some of your more... recent Authors Notes...) Try not to write a chapter really quickly, forget to reread it and then post it up quickly. I'm not sure whether the site's word processor is funny (I've seen it act up in some stories, trust me.) or whether you're not getting anyone to double check your work, but just keep that in mind, because sometimes you see words that are out of place or something. (Like the occasional 'your' instead of 'you')

Um... I'm not sure whether this is an American thing or anything, but you've been spelling Voldemort wrong for the entire story. Personally, I think Voldemort is awesome, so that's the only reason I'm mentioning it.

As far as Ronald Weasle goes, I hope he dies by Hermione's hand.
And Voldemort shall rule the world!

Honestly though. I love what you're doing with Ronald, having him bashing the crap out of Hermione on regular intervals (Does that sound masochistic?- I've been through domestic violence, not pretty, but it changes people, so I guess that's the point of you doing that.)

Just before I end my review, I don't want you to go thinking that I'm all crushing on your story. I love your story, I just want to offer some pointers so you can send it in the right direction.

The bondage sex was kind of strange though. Just a little bit out of place, maybe?

Anyways, Hermione in Thigh high leather/vinyl boots sounds exciting, so I'd better go distract myself.

Toodles!

am sorry for the rude thing that was said to you on monday but to clear the air right now it was not me as i was out at them gym monday at the time it was sent. the person you can thank for that is my cousin's gold digging bitch of an girlfriend. and she was getting me back for tell her what i thought of her. and yes she like all harry potter fanfics. and am sorry in way it is my fault i should have log out of aff before i left but i did not think she would have the guts to get on my computer with out my say so. if you and all your reviews want i will beat the piss out of her. and am sure that queenoftheunderground is eather her or like you said a sock puppet.

Wow, definatly a change of pace. I was actually scared for Hermione as it seemed she jumped from the frying pan into the fire! This was definatly an unexpected, but welcome twist!

The Five Chocolate Chip Cookie Vote came as a sort of a thing I would do. I love to read, even before I came to the U.S. My gram had a plate of five cookies for me. When I asked her why five she told me it was her highest vote. She never wanted to tell me the truth. I found that out on my own when we came to the U.S.; but the five chocolate chip cookie still goes. I hope your dad is feeling better. have your doctors looked at your thyroid? Try to take it easy. Trust me I'm not just blowing wind I came over here with a seizure disorder and I thank God I work at the same hospital that my doctor gives me my meds at.