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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story very much but I need to know why are they all turning to the dark side what is the reason, is there something you have yet to tell us. Looking forward to the next update
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewd in a while, I just haven't had the time to sit and read, stupid RL keeps getting in the way :) I do love this story and I glad to see that Charlie it trying to help Severus find Hermione. Ron is an idoit and I don't think he is going to survive this story. I hope they find Hermione before Ron destroys her.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I missed a lot in the past week, what with moving into our new house! I love it so far! I loved ther twists about Ginny, Draco, Tonks, and Remus. I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon sis!
love ya,
sis
love ya,
sis
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT RON!! OMG!! what happens next? update soon!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@10 please kill ron he would deserve it!!! awesome chapter update soon
*DB*
*DB*
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Yes! Tonkstonkstonks! I'm a little bit miffed over the cannon Tonks/Remus theme, but I'll get over it. I'm glad Bellatrix is having more of an appearance in the story... She's one of my favourite characters (Hence the penname) and I believe Bellatrix should be allowed into the final battle because, to put it bluntly, she's an absolute psychopath- No one can stop her.
I'm annoyed with the Weasley clan, but fantastically happy that Charlie is a death eater. (Yay Charlie!) It's an interesting plot twist, and I'm glad everyone is slowly transferring over to the dark side.
I really can't give you any storyline suggestions at this point because you've made it clear with this chapter that you're well in control of your story right now.
One last thing- 'apperate' is actually spelled 'apparate'
Looking forward to your next update,
Bella
I'm annoyed with the Weasley clan, but fantastically happy that Charlie is a death eater. (Yay Charlie!) It's an interesting plot twist, and I'm glad everyone is slowly transferring over to the dark side.
I really can't give you any storyline suggestions at this point because you've made it clear with this chapter that you're well in control of your story right now.
One last thing- 'apperate' is actually spelled 'apparate'
Looking forward to your next update,
Bella
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! I hope that you in the next chapter not only will return Hermione safely, but let us enjoy a heavy punishment of Ron!!!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I love it when Severus is so protective.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more. I am looking forward to finding out where Ron is keeping Hermione and to see her safely returned to Severus. Please continue this wonderful story.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update please!!!! i want to know what happens!