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for The Change

by SFPANTHER

schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl, you made Hermione evil. I love it! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update again and soon!

Love ya,
sis
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. I'm loving dark hermione.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter enjoyed reading it looking forward to next chapter
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. I am glad Ron got what he deserved, he shouldn't have bothered Hermione. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person Solaris
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This sentence needs a spelling correction, sis: "They would appreciate the jester. Now you know that you are loved by many people." It's gesture, not jesture.

But man, I love this story. Thank you for posting it.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOh Ron you got what was coming to you! I can't wait for more.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Holy Cricket. Awsome story so for. I love your writing. Please add more.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, when Hermione gets mad, she really gets mad! Great chapter. Try joining WIKTT they have lots of betas.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good day, my lovely!

I'm ultimately happy that you've updated. This story has to be my favourite on this site by far. (You will be receiving an email from me about your beta request shortly after my review.)

Okay, This chapter was fun. Bellatrix is a Goddess, and I'm quite glad Hermione's picked up on some of her insane traits. I've never liked Molly Weasley and I'm glad she had her son's body fall right infront of her. This chapter intrigued me as far as Hermione's change has gone and I'll be interested to see your next update.


Take care and don't strain yourself,
Trixy
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.