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I have to review! ch 8.. Dont get me wrong i am enjoying the story. however as one viewr put it the bondage sex was a bit out of place..at least for me that is not a great first time for sex. she was a virgin so being used that way could have been quite dangerous..\i also question how it went considering how she is just coming off from being abused..I know she consented but still was a bit much... just had to put that out there!

Hello !

I've read your story regularly. I'm french and would like to know if i could translate your story for french readers. It's an interesting story and I'm sure it would please french fans and ficreaders.
Let me know if it's ok.

Thanks.

P.S. : Excuse me if there is any grammatical errors, it's been a while since I've written in English...

I swear, as wishy washy as Harry is, it is a wonder he can ever decide what side to take. I love Hermione with Snape (first choice, then Lucius and then Draco...never Ron). Shows lots of promise so far and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. p

I don't know who else is happy, but the only thing that could make it better is if the twins now beat the crap out of that thug. Really stupid for him to tell them that Snape knew where she was, but then again, he is not a brain trust, is he? And if they don't do anything to hold them all (especially Ron) liable for their actions, then I am rooting for Hermione to go with LV. p

Well Hermione has a gag and Ron made me gag so I guess we are even (ha!). Blech, I really can't stand him. I was very proud of Harry though. It is a wonder he has not gone to see her to apologize to her yet. They need to send Ron away this time and not wait for a next time. Love your LV, NM and LM. Also DM is good in this story. Great. p

The only thing that is a shame is that SS and HG "played" the first time that they were together intimately AND that it was her first time. It would have been nicer for her to have had a gentler experience. Of course, I am a sissy and would not be able to withstand that kind of treatment so may not understand what she was going for, although it did not seem as though she liked that part either. Great story so far. p

Boo and Yay! Boo to the twins. They are usually more reasonable. Ron probably fabricated some fairy tale to get them to help...or they just think that she is needed to win. Yay to Charlie, Tonks and Remus. It would be very difficult to think that you are working for the light side when the actions taken do not portray much light. I think it is time for Ron to become a prisoner of war and become acquainted with the sound proof room and maybe LV, LM, SS, etc. brand so he will know whose bitch he is. Excellent! p

am so so sorry to hear about your father having cancer I hope he gets better soon and yes that was wrong of them to ask about this story or any story you might post instead of asking about your family etc! and yes your family and your health goes come first before this story or any story you might post which by the way its great story a bit sad etc but great and funny etc! keep up the great work! xx

ALANRICKMANFAN21 (when I made this account I was 21 years old (I am now 24 years old))

PS you said you where sick too correct? if you dont mind me asking whats wrong? oh god you dont have cancer too do you oh god am sorry hope you get better soon!

Very Best Wishes


PPS I know what its like to have a family memeber who has cancer my first cousin Alan Feely from my irish side my mum's side(who sadly died when I was 10 years old (I am now 24 years old) he died at the age of 21 years old!) had cancer! its was sooo hard on our whole Irish family but he will never be forgotten never! I know its not the same as your dad etc having it but still I know what its like! xx

I just read the author's notes now I wrote that note before without reading it I havent finished the story so i didnt know am soooooo sorry for your loss! :-(

I just finished it the story! well I have to say that was a well written story a bit weird at times but still it was a cool weird! and it was funny in parts so its all was good! Well Done!

excellent story! :-)