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for Don't Embrace the Past

by AnasellaEmm

schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really sweet story so far, I like it a lot. Things seem to be going too smoothly though, I like stories with some conflict. Please update soon.
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so good!
person Kimberly
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the storyline. It is interesting to show more of a human side of draco.
person Kat
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter honey! Can't wait to read more.
person Kat
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent beginning my dear! I found myself laughing out loud at several of your phrases and your excellent grammer and puncuation skills truly compliment your writing. It is refreshing to see someone who cares about such things and knows how to weave a story as well. You have created and captured your charecters very well! I look forward to reading more soon! Be a love and let me know when you update?
person ROUGE
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it please continue.
person Kimberly
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, the chapter is beautifully written and I can't wait until the next chapter! Draco... such a charming boy, isn't he?