rate_review Reviews

Ok, is Blaise about to join the Church of St.Bastard or something? "Lets go play mindgames with a pregnant woman who's scared of being alone. That way I can get my head out of my ass and figure out what I want." Killing is starting to look way too good for him!

I really enjoy your story, you are a terrific writer, BUT I feel like the plot really hasn't moved along at all and this is definitely a plot driven fic. I'm seriously wondering how much more of this Hermione is going to take. The characters are not in a position that is any different from your fourth chapter and I have to agree with some of the other reviewers that in order to form a likeable character she has to show some kind of backbone. I wasn't going to mention anything, because this is your Hermione and if you wish to write her as weak, that is fine. It is after all, your fic. However, I hate to see a wonderful fic merely remain 'good' because you keep hammering it into our heads that Blaise is a womanizing Mama's Boy and Hermione can't get anybody else. I'm really hoping that some competitor for her feelings will show up or that she drastically pushes Blaise away. This wasn't meant to be a flame, I just really enjoy your story and respect your talent, so I felt it best to give my honest opinion.

i like the first chap so far and i can not wait to move to the next i am generally a hermione draco fan but this has caught my interest

wow ok so i did not really see that coming..... i wonder what is going to happen???

ok so i finished what you have so far and i really like it you have done a great job showing both of their struggles please update soon I am excited to see where this goes

Yay for updates! I love this story. I don't know if I've left a review on this site for it before but I've been following it on ff.net. Anyway, glad to see an update and I can't wait for more!!

dude you shoulve made it more hard to get hermione not oooh have it at me..
well even though i DONT really like how its going... but your writing is brilliant :)
so im giving you the pros and cons ..

wow that was awsome .. please please updte soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Vanessa is right on more than one account.... :P
Looking forward to the next chappie, are Vanessa and Blaise going to become friends?

~Spiritxx

please please please update again soon