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for Silk Sheets

by PrettyLittleThing

person luvhp
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And proud you should be, short, sweet and HOT!!!yummy!
person GiaDarcy
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love to beta your new fic. Just send it to me when ever you finish it. And, I think I know what Ponderosa pic you're talking about, and I was actually going to write a fic about it! How creepy is that?!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you just worked on the spelling errors and made it longer!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um...I'm really sorry, but this is just dreadful. The grammar is terrible, and there is not enough detail. I agree with ReflectingSpirit that you should use a beta. They come in handy
person GiaDarcy
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea, but there were quite a few grammatical errors. I'm not trying to sound like a bitch, I'm just obsessed with grammar lol. Maybe you should find a beta reader. I'd be glad to beta your fics for you! Keep writing!

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