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by psychocatblah

schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So... I really do love you. Really. This is the single most fantastic Neville story I have ever read... eighteen or so times... *Ahem, bypassing the crazy, stalkergirl status I'm currently honing in on* I love, love, love Neville and I swear I forgot how much until I read this story. I also kind of love when Neville has a thing for Draco, and oh god, you cultivated their relationship so well, never once breaking eithers' character and... I love you. I really don't think there's any other way I can put it, you are amazing and an absolutely brilliant writer. I would review each time I read this story, as I have many, many times already *Hangs her head in shame* and will again, most definitely, but I don't want to seem... oh, I don't know, crazy... ? I will review all your other Draco pairings, promise, if my work and own stories stop getting in the frickin' way!!! Love, love, love, that's all I can say, you and the story! Write more, constantly, please!!!
person Jilliane
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Aww, poor Neville! Hopefully Romilda can ease some of that angst. I like it how he accepted the situation and decided she was right, and to move on. This was a nicely written and original, and anotehr great read. I'm really enjoying your stories!
person sayanything76
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was nice. I really like reading about Harry and Draco from other perspectives and Neville is not a common choice - which made it all the more enjoyable. Add to it Neville's feelings for Draco and it made this a all the more beautiful and heartbreaking.
person Feromone
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, that was a bit sad but it was very well written, as in it could have happened...(if it wasn't for JK's blatant LACK of slash :p) very nice :)
person Tsunoba
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just...wow.

This one just had me feeling...something at the end.

I'm trying to describe the feeling, but I can't think of the words.

Whatever it is, I'm pretty sure I'm feeling exactly what you wanted the reader to feel. It's just this combination of happiness, loneliness, pity, and...some other emotion all mixed up at once.

You wrote it perfectly, is what I'm trying to say.
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked it!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Neville. He realized to late. Though I'm glad it was Harry by his side instead. Maybe Neville is bi.