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for Their Greatest Mistake

by suzanbones

schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well worth the wait desperate for more though
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i looove it!
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. cannot wait for more!!
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update, loved the party!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw, that's soo cute! I want more!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A tad bit on the short side, but good all the same! Can't wait to see how Draco's plan will unfold, it seems like a decent one.
person mlui
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter, please update again soon!
person luvhp
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah, two new updates for me to read!!!
Lovely, really lovely.
Yes, Draco needs to know her better in order for this relationship to work. And Hermione needs to speak her mind more often, you wouldn't think that would be a problem, but divulging such intimtaes feelings to the one person you supposedly hated...well, I guess I can give her a break ;)
Keep em coming!!!
person Citten
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah! i liked that chapter--all of it! i rather liked that she 'waited' up for him. well this are going to be a little tuff on draco for a while, but he will get better. stupid hermione she just cant take a chance well hopefully draco can win her over. and lets hope that draco will not be like other stupid men and ever say 'is that all' in reference to what is making her upset of worried, or worse laught or chuckle. i think i would serious hurt him (maybe just in the bedroom sense. hehe that would get his attenchion.) do update soon! :)
person Citten
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thoughts--whens the next chapter? :) feelings--boy they are slow. well they will slowly brack down and have to admit it. i will be waiting for that chapter. :) so what next: later that evening or later the next day---what?! i am dying here! :)