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for Their Greatest Mistake

by suzanbones

person wicraven
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
person ichiruki
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. lol. Though I was confused by this phrase in Ch. 1 "of economic proportions" I've not heard it phrased quite like that, though I got the gist of what you were trying to say which is "of epic proportions".

I like that DD is alive in your story too, I LOL'd when he was described as the only one to marry a drunk HG and DM, I could see him as an opportunistic meddler. Can't wait to see what comes next, I'm curious how they'll be stuck together ;)