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Chapter 1: An entertaining one-shot presenting Lucius as selfish and benevolent at the same time, although I think selfishness tips the scales more heavily. If you decide to continue as an author, I would suggest you hunt up a beta to polish your work. It's my guess that English isn't your first language. I probably couldn't even put together one sentence in another language, much less tell an entire story. (grin) But I do suggest a beta for your work. Your smut is very good!

Thanks for sharing.