rate_review Reviews

I'm thinking it won't happen again because of Draco's fear and running away! Poor Harry doesn't understand what happened.

Sooo need chapter 3! Poor Draco!

so awesome!!

Critism: "Draco drawled as he got up from the floor and away from Potter.
They had collided with each other, and Draco had landed on top of Harry Potter. Before Draco could react, Harry had changed their positions so that now, Harry..."

I honestly doubt that you meant that the way it came out. I think thais would sound a lot better if you were to add two words, "moved to" and changed one little 'o' to and 'e.'

Correction: Draco drawled as he moved to get up from the floor and way from Potter.

This way Harry has time to reverse their position and doesn't have to drag the blond slytherin back to the floor.

Loves:

I enjoyed this story greatly. I am waiting for the next installment. I know it can only get better from here. Harry's confusin at the blond god not wanting to be kissed, Draco's denial of waiting Harry so bad it hurts. I know, I know you said nothing of the sort but I'm a 'tween' reader. Which means I read between the lines and make up my own story until you update. Thanks for sharing and I'll see[figuratively] you with the next update.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

more please... soon :p

This is not over! Not over I say, until the fat lady sings. I feel like I've been out teased. I want more, that left me needing something more, something hard and concrete. Not like that you dirty minded fools. LOL, I so enjoyed this so far but like I said I need more. It was so transparent, like I could see right through the scene into the black void behind it. I'm rambling, but it sounds nice.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Fat Lady