rate_review Reviews

I loved the ending. Honestly I'm a sucker for heartbreaking farewells and yours was epic. Overall story was good. Near the half the plot gained some holes and to the very end I couldn't understand why Voldemort just let the Old Coot find and destroy his horcruxes or some other minor things. However I liked your story and the ending was great ( just like smutty scenes, shame there were so few of them xD)

FAN!~

Loved it... even though I was sad when Tom died, I knew it was coming... cuz Dumbledore is an asshole... *nods* But yeah I great write, captivating read. You are an amazing author. ^_~

Love,
Rose

Fantastic story!! I loved the plot, the changes you made to canon, the explainationsfor your changes were believable, just an all around great story. Though I'll admit I was torn up when Tom died and didn't know how you'd pull off Harry turning to LV, you did a great job of it. Thank you for posting this. It was several hours of my life well spent. =)

this story was amazing. it took me two days to read as I had to go to school during that time. you write incredibly well,and would you ever write something orginal, don't hesitate to publish it. the only faults i could see in this story is that you relie too heavily on cliche's typical for fan fiction, but even so you manage to get the feeling you'r looking for. I actualy cried when Tom died (and that Tom and Voldemort weren't the same person was a fantastic plot twist!). also, that you didn't try to fit in the entire HP cast was a relife! it never ends well when a fan fiction writer tryes to do that. you have been very true to the orginal plot and timeline of the books, which also strenghten the feel of the fic. this is what COULD have happend if tom riddle didn't die. I'm very glad to have red this piece and I wish you the best of luck with future projects.

I *sob* really *sob* loved *sob* this *sob* story.
I started falling in love with Tom Riddle.
God. Why can't anyone write more with him and Harry.
Though seeing Voldermort so...normal was nice.
Lovely story.
Truly loved it.
Bellatrix really is quite insane, ain't she?
But I like it how you gave her a tender side.

That's quite touching -- very sweet.

Thanks!
~M

I abso-fucking-lutely loved it! Great job!!!

Jan ^_~

I must say, somehow that ending was just perfect. Very well done. I'm glad Harry found peace.

I'm sad to see this story end but happy to see harry get his happily ever after