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by Ssserpensssotia

person biebie
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM

He I just wanted to say I really like your storry. But I do hope that you will make Tom Riddle a bid rougher.
He is to time, to well in controll of his anger.

And I would also like if he took Hermione to the chamber of secrets, to get her confecion. Would be nice and dark.

But as I already told you, lilke the storry.

Biebie
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!!!! Moree soon!!!! :)
person Nerys
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, some nice smut and smut and some more smut. LOL.
Like I said before... one is stuck in a bedroom with Tom Riddle... oh how dreadful. Muahahahaahaa!!!!
So ... can I just switch places with Hermione now??? XD XD XD

WHERE IS MY NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

snickers... what goes around comes around. ;p
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo weird with Mione hearing voices, but I mean it's weird in a good way. It definitely caught my attention and I'm enjoying it.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha yes poor Tom. Can't wait for another chappy! :)
person Nerys
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, poor Hermione. Being petrified and all alone in a bedroom with handsome Tom Riddle... what is a girl to do? Chit chat? Muahahahahaaha!!! (OK, draws mind out of gutter). Love your story, they are so deliciously aggravated by each other. Please update soon... I am so curious to the new chapters.

I don't know if you saw it, but some of your text on this site is bundled together. What I mean is that the paragraphs are not shown properly (dialogue: speech between two people is placed directly underneath the other's sentence and stuff like that). I had the same thing after posting the first chapter of Bittersweet here. The paragraphs in Word were not seen here for some reason and I had to use the edit chapter function to correct it there. And now, all of the sudden, with the newer chapters the site does see the enters. I think it has something to do with the way you set Word out to react on the press enter button, but I am not certain.

Anyway: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the scene where Hermione hits Tom with the chair! Priceless! Can't wait for more! :)
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Can't wait for more! :)
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start keep going!!


Update soon!!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)