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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is AMAZING! I cant wait for more
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pls!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am finally up-to-date with this story, and I find it very entertaining. I've had to laugh several times, especially at Hermione's reactions to 'the voice'.
I also wanted to comment on Nerys' review of The Eloquent Quill
I also wanted to comment on Nerys' review of The Eloquent Quill
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha....just read Chapter 4. So funny!!! My stomach hurts...
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yesss, yesss, yesss... Now Serpie knows what happens to people who fail to update and bring the dark lord his well-earned pleasure. Yes, they get an allergy to the sun, while staying on vacation in a happy sunny environment. Muahahahahaaa!!!
So, I have no vacation and am pitifully at home (where it rains) without a life. Hence, I reread colors... I so love their bickering. XD
Anyway, I had a couple of observations while I was reading that I wanted to write down in this review. however, my brilliant (cough, cough) mind has forgotten what my sharp and to the point insights were, so here I am writing a shipload of nonsense once more. Nothing out of the ordinary there.
But I do remember my utmost vital and precious comment of them all. Here it is. Brace yourself. Yes... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When you get back from vacation, I expect an immidiate and diligent attitude towards adding loads and loads of chapters to this story. Otherwise... yesssss... HE won't be happy. No, not happy at ALL. And those pills won't help, dear.
Wishes you a happy birthday and is rooting for the Russian team too,
your partner in crime, snickering Nerys
So, I have no vacation and am pitifully at home (where it rains) without a life. Hence, I reread colors... I so love their bickering. XD
Anyway, I had a couple of observations while I was reading that I wanted to write down in this review. however, my brilliant (cough, cough) mind has forgotten what my sharp and to the point insights were, so here I am writing a shipload of nonsense once more. Nothing out of the ordinary there.
But I do remember my utmost vital and precious comment of them all. Here it is. Brace yourself. Yes... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When you get back from vacation, I expect an immidiate and diligent attitude towards adding loads and loads of chapters to this story. Otherwise... yesssss... HE won't be happy. No, not happy at ALL. And those pills won't help, dear.
Wishes you a happy birthday and is rooting for the Russian team too,
your partner in crime, snickering Nerys
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cries out loud, because ... the promised smut to chapter 16 is still not here.
What should I do now? I need a moment of relaxation from all that heavy duty bittersweet writing, which a bit of colors smut would provide me with just fine. But alas.... Serpie is probably hiding in her scaly *dun dun dun* in her Goblin-made-glass CoS again. I am thinking of asking our Lord to do something about the lack of smut he is experiencing. Yesssssss. That soundssss like a terrific idea.
Go team Dark Lord!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
What should I do now? I need a moment of relaxation from all that heavy duty bittersweet writing, which a bit of colors smut would provide me with just fine. But alas.... Serpie is probably hiding in her scaly *dun dun dun* in her Goblin-made-glass CoS again. I am thinking of asking our Lord to do something about the lack of smut he is experiencing. Yesssssss. That soundssss like a terrific idea.
Go team Dark Lord!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHA!! Serpie, you know who this is...
I've just nicked Nerys' laptop and are using her name to type a message at this ridiculous muggle invention undisturbed.
Now... we need to talk about the lack of updates in this fic. I am NOT happy about that. And you know what happens when I am not happy.
No, not the pills going missing... daft woman. The other bit.
Yes, indeed... 13,5 inch long, yew wood, phoenix feather core... that's it, dear. You're catching on fast, aren't you?
Now, as for some suggestions about the next colors chapter, I clearly feel something needs to be done about Hermione's insolent behavior. I never, EVER allow people to make me look like a fool and I also think that insipid bird would make a terrific lunch for Nagini.
Speaking of animals, I am off. I need to 'explain' to Nerys that her love for doggies doesn't necessarily mean I am interested in four legged creatures who say whuf. Stupid Muggle women who write stories about me. ARGH!!!
I've just nicked Nerys' laptop and are using her name to type a message at this ridiculous muggle invention undisturbed.
Now... we need to talk about the lack of updates in this fic. I am NOT happy about that. And you know what happens when I am not happy.
No, not the pills going missing... daft woman. The other bit.
Yes, indeed... 13,5 inch long, yew wood, phoenix feather core... that's it, dear. You're catching on fast, aren't you?
Now, as for some suggestions about the next colors chapter, I clearly feel something needs to be done about Hermione's insolent behavior. I never, EVER allow people to make me look like a fool and I also think that insipid bird would make a terrific lunch for Nagini.
Speaking of animals, I am off. I need to 'explain' to Nerys that her love for doggies doesn't necessarily mean I am interested in four legged creatures who say whuf. Stupid Muggle women who write stories about me. ARGH!!!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HI,
I just can't get enough of this chapter. It is so, SO funny to read about a Hermione who doesn't turn into a beauty queen for a change, but deliberately dresses up to look as ridiculous as possible to spoil things for Riddle. ROFL. Oh gosh, she is so in trouble now. Muahahahhhahaaa!! I think his response will be (cough) 'interesting' (cough).
I also adored the snowwhite, fairytale princess start of this chapter. Though with you as the author, I get the feeling I should be thinking Shrek instead. LOL.
So he is isolating her and she is letting him. Hmmm... big mistake Hermione. That way you give him too great an advantage. He already has a huge one, and he is not to be trusted. Remember who you made a deal with. grrrr... Yes, mr. Paranoia... LOL.
Sure, move into her room, because Dumbledore may be trying to screw things up for you or because there is nobody to do the cleaning anymore. That is the lamest excuse to move into a girl's room I ever heard, Riddle, I would have expected something a bit more cunning from the most evil, powerful wizard of all time. Pfftt... my mistake. Nerys huffs haughtily. (No, she is not, I repeat NOT, jealous of Hermione at all).
Yes, DD is hiding in there!!!!!!!! You kill me with these sentences, Serpie, you really do kill me. (Though I think DD would not prefer Hermione from the two... snickers... ROFL, because she is envision where DD would be hiding inside of Tom then. Muahhahaahhahhaaa!!!) Oh gosh, I think I better find a good hiding place now. glances across her living room anxiously for certain Dark Lords.
"DUMBL!!!! Okay, who named the bird?!! Explain it now, Serpie, immidiately..." the Dark Lord says menacingly.
"I know, my Lord, I know," Nerys says excitedly. "It had to be Serpie, master, she writes the fic, she names the bird."
"Excellent deduction, Nerys," the Dark Lord replies and he glares at Serpie, while twirling his wand between his spidery fingers. "Now, what shall I do with you."
"Imperio! My Lord!" Nerys suggests happily. "So she has to UPDATE ASAP!!!!"
"Another wonderful suggestion, Nerys, you are well underway of becoming my favourite Death Eater."
Nerys looks very smug and sticks out tongue to Serpie (but then she remembers she has to update bittersweet soon... and she remembers what is in the next chapter already... YIKES!!!!!!!!!!!!)
And I adored the interactions between the Parrot and the Snake. I loved how Tom immidiately decided Hermione was the Parrot, of course. Rolls eyes.
And can I just say I love how you build up the tension towards whatever it is you reveal in every chapter. I adore those little clues and stuff.
I just can't get enough of this chapter. It is so, SO funny to read about a Hermione who doesn't turn into a beauty queen for a change, but deliberately dresses up to look as ridiculous as possible to spoil things for Riddle. ROFL. Oh gosh, she is so in trouble now. Muahahahhhahaaa!! I think his response will be (cough) 'interesting' (cough).
I also adored the snowwhite, fairytale princess start of this chapter. Though with you as the author, I get the feeling I should be thinking Shrek instead. LOL.
So he is isolating her and she is letting him. Hmmm... big mistake Hermione. That way you give him too great an advantage. He already has a huge one, and he is not to be trusted. Remember who you made a deal with. grrrr... Yes, mr. Paranoia... LOL.
Sure, move into her room, because Dumbledore may be trying to screw things up for you or because there is nobody to do the cleaning anymore. That is the lamest excuse to move into a girl's room I ever heard, Riddle, I would have expected something a bit more cunning from the most evil, powerful wizard of all time. Pfftt... my mistake. Nerys huffs haughtily. (No, she is not, I repeat NOT, jealous of Hermione at all).
Yes, DD is hiding in there!!!!!!!! You kill me with these sentences, Serpie, you really do kill me. (Though I think DD would not prefer Hermione from the two... snickers... ROFL, because she is envision where DD would be hiding inside of Tom then. Muahhahaahhahhaaa!!!) Oh gosh, I think I better find a good hiding place now. glances across her living room anxiously for certain Dark Lords.
"DUMBL!!!! Okay, who named the bird?!! Explain it now, Serpie, immidiately..." the Dark Lord says menacingly.
"I know, my Lord, I know," Nerys says excitedly. "It had to be Serpie, master, she writes the fic, she names the bird."
"Excellent deduction, Nerys," the Dark Lord replies and he glares at Serpie, while twirling his wand between his spidery fingers. "Now, what shall I do with you."
"Imperio! My Lord!" Nerys suggests happily. "So she has to UPDATE ASAP!!!!"
"Another wonderful suggestion, Nerys, you are well underway of becoming my favourite Death Eater."
Nerys looks very smug and sticks out tongue to Serpie (but then she remembers she has to update bittersweet soon... and she remembers what is in the next chapter already... YIKES!!!!!!!!!!!!)
And I adored the interactions between the Parrot and the Snake. I loved how Tom immidiately decided Hermione was the Parrot, of course. Rolls eyes.
And can I just say I love how you build up the tension towards whatever it is you reveal in every chapter. I adore those little clues and stuff.
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOO!!!! I luv this chappy!!! Is Tom really serious? :O Mione sounds so pretty! I can't wait for the next chappy!